Reviews for Naruto, The Dark Flash
Smartyul chapter 11 . 6/25
Why did it have to be discontinued.
Smartyul chapter 1 . 6/25
This had re-birthed my love of SAO.
Nightwing991 chapter 1 . 6/22
Just quickly, I’m pretty sure that SAO was only released within Japan
Dbanksischillin chapter 11 . 4/1
Not gonna lie. This story is fairly well built and I enjoy how you have Kirito and Naruto playing off of each other and being brothers in arms. It's an interesting dynamic and adding the girls in while giving the intrigue of his abilities and the questions rising about the program its amazing. Thank you for writing this even if you never finish it.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/19
It’s too cracky for my tastes. Was hoping for a real ship but everything about the 4 of them is a joke and can’t be taken seriously. And the way asuna acts would have me cutting her out of my life. Despicable.
Everything else is pretty good.
but it’s always annoying to have people scream out their attacks like an idiot. Especially since he already tested the ability to do it silently.
Infinitely worse for naruto show where they are supposed to be ninjas.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/19
The stupid obsession with any one food is beyond stupid. It’s one of the reasons I don’t watch the stupidity that is naruto. He’s a moron. This one is a lot better but the running gag that is ramen is just dumb.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/14
Another stupid plot decision made solely so you can jam cannon events into the story. I don’t like this at all. You really do make stupid decisions.
Guest chapter 8 . 2/14
A month and he couldn’t send a message? Not believable. Chapter was very stupid.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/14
Your story is good. Where you lose major points is lying with your word count. User review reply’s do not belong in the damn story chapters. That is a huge asshole move by shitty authors. Also omakes. They are not cannon, they are not part of the story, so they also hugely inflate your word count. It’s so disappointing to think you have found a nice long story to sink your teeth into just to have a huge chunk of it be a waste of space and pointless.
Silver chapter 6 . 11/12/2019
Lol, I just realized that Hate is their equivalent of Agro. I play tank a lot so it's al,oat sad that I just realized that XD
Foda-se chapter 4 . 9/23/2019
This story sucks, was poorly made and became a garbage without creativity ... It was a waste of time, what a waste !
Rifat chapter 10 . 8/6/2019
Wish you didn’t make Naruto say Tatakai, should’ve just made him say something that HE would say.
Feelings-of-Solitude chapter 11 . 7/28/2019
The end of this chapter almost made me cry. I was wondering if you would continue writing this story? Will you ever think of continuing it?
Guest chapter 11 . 7/10/2019
Great story please don’t stop writing it
Guest chapter 11 . 2/18/2019
Update, please...? ... that’s all, I just love this story. Pretty please with sugar on top?
Ps. I’m pretty sure thy means you along with thou and thee, they are just used in different contexts.
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