Wow such a cliffhanger I can’t wait for the next chapter!

so glad you updated! i can’t wait to read more :)

oh wow thats a twist

RUFIO! God, I love that kid and I'm so excited to see how you incorporate him. I always wished OUAT would include him in the series because what a great second he would have made. Any who, I know you posted this chapter a month ago, but whenever I see an update from you I try to wait for a really awful day or a really awesome day to read it. Lost in Storybrooke always makes me happy and I can't tell you how many times I've reread it. I started reading this my freshman year of college (six years ago!) and it's still one of my all-time favorite fanfictions across all fandoms. Your plots are engaging and exciting, filled with twists and turns no matter if they are the main or sub plot. Your characterizations of each character is unique and original but still stays true to who they are. I just adore what you do and how much thought you put into each chapter. I know every story must come to an end, but I hope yours is still a ways off.

Glad your back! :) I don’t like tiger lily I want her gone ngl I always liked pan and Wendy but atm she’s ruining it also how much is actually left of this

wow Rufio thats a twist i did not see coming

Love the new chapter, I can't wait to see Wendy, Felix, and Tink go back to Neverland ! I don't really mind the long wait for updates bc the chapters are always so good !

GAHH THIS IS GETTING SO INTERESTING!

And I misread last chapter tbh. I honestly am not enjoying the Pan and Wendy moments because as Pan gets more evil or is shown that way, the less likable the ship gets. It doesn't seem like Wendy is...well in some ways it does but for the most part Pan is just possessive. And that's not well healthy.

I'm wondering when we'll see the Peter side of things.

I like that you're describing him as psychopath so perfectly and you're not holding back in showing how devious and two faced Peter Pan is because that is exactly how he is. He feels like the original and yet also OUAT's Peter Pan all the same.

I think the other characters might need development. I'm hoping we see Dark!Snow. Also Tamara and Greg working alongside Pan is interesting because they know Peter Pan is magic...so are they going to doublecross him too?

Poor Henry is getting a wake-up call. I hope his development is a lot more better than what's shown in the show. Neverland Arc was sadly a disapointment and it was so hyped too!

oookaaayyy... this has sort of turned Rated R...uh what was Tiger Lily doing between Peter's legs. Ugh cat fights. I hate the Pan has all the power. He's turning the girls against each other...

this is feeling like a CW show.

ALSO WHY ARE TEENAGERS DRINKING?

Wait did Wendy and Peter have sex and why did we miss it!? I'M WAITING FOR THE SMUT DAMN IT!

Though I have to say this drastic change is sudden with Peter's pubescent troubles...

gAHHHH NOW I'M WONDERING WHO IS PETER'S FATHER?

Why am I more interested in this then wondering who Rumple's father is?

I don't think I ever cared tbh. Peter Pan is the boy who refused to grow up and had mother issues. Nobody ever mentions the father...

I always headcannoned it was Hook lol

wow did not see that coming

God I'm so hooked on this. I literally binge read the entire thing this whole day!
I'm honestly loving Peter and Wendy's relationship and how his change is somewhat noticeable to how he was before the curse.
I'm looking forward as to seeing where this will go and can't wait for the Neverland arc!

yay, you updated...great job cant wait for next chapter

i love how Peter declares he is going to go after Snow, thats a interesting twist I hope he keeps to it and I cant wait for the neverland arc

I didn't like the way they ended this episode either, but you make it work! I feel like I say this in every review I leave for this story, but I just love Wendy so much and I my heart always goes out to her during the rough parts. I can only imagine how scared she is leaving Peter like that. I just know that he's going to hold a grudge against her for it.