I thought this was a very sweet little one shot. Of course the writing was magnificent and well thought out. I love your writing. This will do until a Dovekin update!

Brittany is a genius in all matters concerning Santana, pure and simple.

Well, that was so adventurous of Rachel! Jaja Sweet fic! :D

Xoxoxo

This was so sweet...the Rachel kissed cracked me up...I thought it would put Santana over the edge;) possessive girl, wishing this was longer

S2 brittana hurts my heart! This was great, even tho the angst the ending was cute :)

Aww cute! This fic definitely got me in the Christmas spirit! ;) And I love your glee characters and their interactions! Your Brittana is always adorable and on point! Nice job for your first pre Brittana! :)

Ah the angst. So good though! I love how patient Britt is with San. Her plan was genius. I'm glad she knew what SantNa's present meant. Thanks for sharing this early present with us. :o) I've missed you! I hope you get to post more soon. Enjoy your holiday!

Oh man, so *maybe* you managed to warm the heart if this grinchy, anti-fluff Aussie. Maybe :) That freakin box just killed me. It was perfect!

"She didn't give one fuck about what Lard Tubbers had suggested..." This cracked me up! I have a very small tolerance for Tubs in fic and this summed up my feelings perfectly :)

"Recently, Santana had started to wear these striped tight fitting short dresses to every occasion. For the party, the red and white stripes around her body made her look like a candy cane. Brittany had always liked candy canes." This is a bloody long quote, I'm sorry, but those striped dresses are EVERYTHING and this was all just the best visual!

"Santana had been noticing the length and measure of each gaze. And despite her resolve to ignore each second of Brittany's unabashed attention, internally those seconds counted time between her heart beats." I've written and erased a dozen thoughts on this but I basically just love it :)

"One shot.
Her lips were on everyone's lips.
Two shots.
Santana licked her own after the burn.
Three shots."

I laughed so hard at this! I love well placed smart ass Brittany :)
"Brittany, I know we haven't always seen eye to eye-"

Britt interjected. "Because of your height-"

Also my face when police *sirens* flooded the streets. Who knew that could make me so happy!

And yes, again, that damn box. Just perfect!

Oh. My. God. Kell. That story made me so happy! I feel all warm and fuzzy inside! I'm so surprised you didn't write any epic lady sex ahahaha Seriously tho this story was really great! I love that Britt was willing to go through such great lengths to get the kiss she really wanted. And Rachel, WOW girl be cray-cray! Although who do we know in they're right mind that would turn a free kiss down if it was coming from Britt? I love your shorts they're always fun and hot!

P.s Your writing sucks said no one ever!
love yah ;)
-Ash

Soo cuute! Even with the angst

Damn, that was sweet! And so Brittany...

KELL NICO You FluffyGrinch Angsty Christmas Writer
"internally those seconds counted time between her heart beats" boom boom, boom boom, boom boom. That's my heart too.
"twelve miles they spent in silence. twelve miles with winterfresh on her lips. twelve miles she couldn't stop wondering if Brittany could taste winterfresh on her own lips" i like this sequence of sentences because the 3rd one is like connecting the previous two. oh how i have missed your writing.
"Now it was all...it was all blurry" grrr painful, angsty, hurtful, uncertainty
"Her winter peacoat draped over Brittany's on the coat rack by the door." the most M rated moment on this one-shot :P
Brittany with that red rudolf ball and antler ears so precious.
"Nothing was good enough for her. Nothing would mean enough". So much love here. Sigh
"Inevitably, tangibles and gifts dissipated" love this one.
"The sounds her heels made was impossible to miss" click, click, click, boom boom, boom boom, boom boom.
"One. Two" the distance, the waiting, the longing, the staring, the energy, the love, the miss opportunity.
So all the kisses were cheek kisses and no one can convince me otherwise. That's my version and i'm sticking with it.
The way you wrote the sentences from "One shot" to "Four shots" loved it. it's so you.
Rachel entrance? Priceless. Funny. This is the way i imagine Rachel Berry and the Berry that i like, and the Rachel that the show lost along the way. You nailed her, i mean you nailed it. All this interaction and reactions from everyone was awesome and so funny.
"But when Brittany's attention settled on Santana it was as if she were Brittany's only anchor and neither of them was willing to look at anything else" be still my heart.
All the moments from the morning after the party were glorious. Every sensation felt. Goosebumps all over the skin. Brittana why so perfect?
"to Brittany it held everything...Santana had left a piece of herself behind. Brittany held the box tighter to her chest - she was willing to wait" bring the kleenex
I knew i had a reason to like peppermint so much.
Lovely one-shot.