I really like the story, but oh lord the grammar&spelling mistakes are killing me lol

Don't you mean "jotted" and not "jolted"? Sorry, but that's been kinda bugging me lol.

Just wanna say this story is so much better than normal books in real life I love your stories
I think a good story is able to make the reader feel how the protagonist is feeling and cry that’s what makes this story a good one and don’t worry bout grammar and spelling mistakes, you did well

Hello!
( Don't get mad at me if this review don't make any sense some time, I'm not from an english speaking country and even if I can understand english when I have to write or to speak it's not the same erf, so sorry . )
Well, I just finished to read this fic and well.. what can I say? I'm a bit disturbed. I don't really know how I feel after that. To be honest this is the first time I cried so much. And I read a lot of sad stories. But I never cried. I have some hypothesis.
Maybe it's because this fic is too familiar for me. I'm a sick pianist and singer on youtube. I don't know if you created this disease for the fic or not because my country isn't an english speaking country so I'm not good with disease's name. But I know it's a real disease even if the name is not the good one. Why? Because I know it too much, I said I'm sick and that's it. Even if I'm only 17, I know I'll die before my 20th birthday. Even playing piano is not easy for me like before. But you know I have no regret. After all we only live once right? For me it's just a shorter life than in average. I'm affraid but I know some people are wainting for me after my death. My first love died when I was 11. There is my bestfriend too. She died two years ago. Hit by a car. She disapeared just like that. And four month ago my bestfriend died too. His illness caught him. That's why Kuroko and this story feel too well known for me. Even if I have my father, I don't have anything else excepted all that I read and wrote. ( My mom disowned me before dying because of her sickness... such an ironic story )
All of that is painfull memory and I don't know why I told you about this part of my life. But I think this is the explanation of "why this story touched my heart and made me cry this much". Just don't pity me or say that you're sorry for me. My life wasn't and isn't easy but I learn how to deal with it. I think nobody can really handle this disease and yes, I fear. I don't want to die. But it's not like if I have any choice so I try to keep smilling and fight to don't have any regret when it will be my turn to leave this world.
Oh god so much useless chitchat. Sorry x) Just, I loved your story even if it's sad. I love how you make Kuroko so strong and so fragile at the same time.
I will ask you one and only thing. Can I translate this fic? I really want to share this story with other people of my country who can't read or understand english. Some of them have this disease too but they don't have anything to fight for and they have no reason to stay strong. They're more like ghost than human... I want them to read this fic too and maybe it can help them and touch their heart... I don't really know how to say it but it's really important for me.. so I beg you to allow me to translate and post this fic ( with credit of course )

First of all, sorry to correct, but Tokyo University is every bit as prestigious as Harvard Law or Yale.

My eyes are hot,
My body are shivering
and also my hands are itching to throw out my laptop because of the last two chapter I had read.
This is why I hate rich-great-families and all the old lie stuff (I'm really sorry for snap at this chapter author-san)

But I admit, this is really well writing. to know that you could make the reader reach their emotions.

Good Job author-san.

finally was he that dumb to not know it was her this whole time

great story i cant wait to read the second chapter

This story was so sad. I cried more than 5 times, it was just so sad, but it was really good too. This is one of the best fan fiction I have ever read.

was that love live, holy crap

Absolutely awesome story, although Nigou is actually an Alaskan Malamute. But still, great job!

Uh-oh what will happen? What will Kise-kun do? Dun dun dun!

Nice writing, and I think this is a good idea.

"I came out to have a good time, and aims honestly feeling so attacked right now." - is what I've been feeling since the chapter where Akashi died. I was like 'what?!' this fiction deserves more than 195 reviews to be honest. It has a very good story plot. Made me cry couple of times and made me hate a character so much. Thank you for writing this story! And congratulations in completing it :)

Sabrina-nee
Keep Calm & Write Fan Fictions

I cried for a good 15 minutes because of this story. its beautiful and well.. You really a box of tissues for this. thank you for writing this well written story! (_)