Some typos but a really well thought out chapter. The diamond scar analogy was quite beautifully convinced .

Damn that was a heavy chapter

Your writing just keeps getting better and better! Keep up the good work. :)

Oh I truly enjoyed this story. You keep me reading until the end. 4 hours of laughing and crying. I love the the way you made the love scenes visual. I enjoyed reading your MFMM story. Looking forward to more of your stories.

Definitely, entirely and 100% well written. I have no other words for the absolute adorableness of the romance sections and the scarily accurate murder scenes, indeed my chosen words are probably an understatement

Thankyou for another engaging tale...
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Jack should consider taking his own advice. ;-)

This was a well written story. I loved every chapter and now look forward to reading the next story in this wonderful universe. Thank you!

I must say that I have read many stories by many talented writers on this site; but this chapter - Black Diamond is by far one of the best -so far. The emotions; the tenderness and the love portrayed here was absolutely amazing!

Now I know this must be a red herring; Raphael could not have killed Grogan & Grogan could not have killed Raphael. But at least our dynamic duo is back in together mode.

I'm really enjoying this story of yours. You've encapsulated so much of the underlying emotion(s) in canon MFMM...the reluctance of both P&J to reveal everything to the other...that's a scary thing to do. (As an side, your phobia continues to haunt me...and I continue to try & think of ways to subvert your conscious feelings...I'm being weird, I know. Is it possible to look at an arachnid, but see something else? Like a harmless insect instead? Maybe a praying mantis; a helpful insect, it eats mosquitoes & other nasty insects, although it's personal sexual behavior leaves something to be desired - the female kills the male after mating. Do they exist in Oz? I'm not being flippant, really, just trying to help...)

This fic was recommended to me and I've loved every word. You write beautifully. Thank you for sharing it with us.

That bit about the scars was just lovely. Thank you for writing this!

love your stories

I'm so lucky that you were nearly finished this by the time I first read it. Apart from the last few chapters, I got to read it straight through with almost hardly any waiting. Fantastic. I loved it and the end couldn't have been more perfect. Definitely one of the well written stories. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.