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Damn...

Dahlia just made a incredible mistake
That no batman fan would ever do
And I grimaced when she said it
She told the Scarecrow what she was scared of...
Damn

Love the story but I can't wait for the moment where she meets croc

Oooh, Crane's still alive! :D This is going to be interesting. I wonder how Eddie will react when he finds out!

The Riddler really can be a jerk, can't he? Poor Dahlia. I wonder what will happen when she's reunited with Waylon. That should be an interesting meeting!

Awesome chapter! Story's doing great so far! Can't wait to see what'll happen next! ;D

I wonder if Crocodiles like the taste of Penguins… Hmm...

Ivy and Harley are so awesome when they're protective of Dahlia (plus their dynamics together are so cute). Although… tsk tsk to Joker and Harley for trying to corrupt their goddaughter with tequila! Joker is hilarious with taking his job as godfather seriously! Looking forward to seeing more of them!

Poor Dahlia. Wonder what mommy dearest did to her. :( Wonder if she was taking out her anger for Killer Croc on her own daughter.

So that was the origin of her voice… the therapist created it. That is a very interesting twist. I'm going to miss her voice! Between her and the Riddler, it was hilarious and adorable whenever Dahlia got flustered. :) Very excited to see Dahlia meet Killer Croc!

I love the way Dahlia and her voice bicker! :D And chocolate chip pancakes… yummy… No wonder the Riddler is always so high-energy! :)

I like how you write the Riddler! You capture his dark humor and arrogance well: "Riddler was going to shoot the retarded monkey", "sneaking out isn't possible unless you're the smartest man on earth." :D And I like his sort-of friendship with Dr. Crane. Hope Crane survived somehow!

PLEAS UPDATE OMG