So basically Bella seeing her mom is pretty much the exact scene from britney spears' crossroads.

Wtf

If only it had an end ...great story ..I'm glad you have mentioned re working it as I think there is a bit of waffle that could go...but underneath is a great story that I'm enjoying ...wish you the best thanks for sharing have fun

I have read this story many times since this announcement and I do hope you do the rewrite soon but at the months go by my hope is depleting.

I hope that you whatever has kept you away for this long you are having a happy life and hopefully you will come back to us at here.

Hope you write soon

I sincerely hope that you plan to re-work this story soon...

Your authors note gave me a heart attack! Lol I thought you were done updating it, which made my heart IMMEDIATELY drop, because you have made such amazing characters that in my mind are real at this point. I’ll follow this story and hopefully one day you’ll... maybe finish it ? ...please?
Thanks for writing !

Do you plan to re-write this or just abandon?

... And Four months later?

I waited for sooo long for an update. I hope you re-write soon. Eagerly waiting...

I wish I'd thought to read the last chapter first...

Please continue pleaseeeeeeee

Yes we expect Edward to give in. How is Bella going to know she’s any different from others or if she means anything to him if he treats her like everyone else!
And are you rewriting everything? It’s not finished! Ahh!

Read all chapters in the last day minus the next ones. Well it’s good to see them open up. But they all drive me crazy! Edward is so frustrating and Vella is so confusing and Eric is so annoying ! This story is driving me crazy cuz they’re all frustrating but it’s pullrd me in. It drives me nuts that one if the best stories I’ve read has these characters that drive me insane but I guess that’s part of what makes it so intriguing.

BELLA needs to sit down. She’s putting all the focus on blaming Charlie when she really is mad at him for how Edward is treating her and how mike treated her. Being controlling and being selfish are the traits she’s throwing on Charlie when that’s really ed and mike. It’s so frustrating that she’s taking all her mixed feelings out on Charlie and not the people that use and abuse her. She’s weak and needs to grow up and get real

I don’t get why she keeps lumping Charlie with mike and Eric and all those people trying to oppress her— she sounds whiney and looking for someone to blame other than herself and Charlie hasn’t done anything.
I’m glad jake told her straight to her face what she’s doing since she’s too intrigued by Edward to think clearly.
I don’t believe Edward is breaking into mikes house just for Bella so she shouldn’t take that as him trying to be anything other than he is—a criminal who doesn’t care. I hope she isn’t swayed by his pretty face but clearly it’s nt working