cant wait for more

I like it when it was in Aki POV but I do still like the The story can’t wait for the update and to see more of her past

lolz, oh my I wonder if Mori is being extra affectionate due to a new rival on the scene, I cant wait for the next chappie XD

I hope you update soon! And that there more advanced on Mori and Aki

Hey,
I wanted to write down a few things here. First of all I really like your story. Aki seems to have something in her past that really makes me curious and urges me on to continue reading. Also her relationship is interesting to read. Mori tends to be depected as someone who doesn't really take that next step often and here you have him be involved with her quite a bit. It makes for a nice gradual flow in their relationship, which is always nice to read.
I'd warn you about grammar and spelling but not everyone has the means to check this perfectly and despite the mistake shere and there, it's readable.
What I would like to warn you about though is in chaoter 1 where Aki has suddenly built in a security room. I don't know whether you plan to do something with this later on or if it was spontaneous. But it nearly made me quit the story because it was just a bit random and unbelievable. I wanted to let you know because a lot of people tend to base their opinion of the first chapter.
Great story and other than that first little thing, I didn't put it down before finishing it.

Write moreeee!

I LOVE your story! Aki is an amazing character and I love her and Mori together! It's super cute! And the added yaoi bits are hilarious! Please update again soon! Because I really want to know what happens next!

This story is beyond adorable and I love it! Update again soon please!

Pls update

I can't wait until the next chapter! Update soon please!

awsome story cant wait for more

Love the story. But just to clarify: what you have written as goons braai, should be Green Beret. (US Army Special Forces). Continue the good work.

Please write more! The Suki part was beautiful, as well as the More x Akira. Keep up the flipping awesome good work!

Please continue!

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