i think you forgot abt the whole AlBis thing

I advise you to inform yourself about the sins, because It is wrong to sin.
Moreover inform yourself about sins against the Holy Spirit, because they are not forgivable!
I'm sending you this message, because I think it's important to inform.
It's better write what it's true.
I will make a list to go straight to the point about what don't do.

)Better don't put adjectives or words that don't represent you as nicknames.
)Better don't write titles not true for stories.
)Don't write offensive words next to the word "God" and "Holy" because are blasphemous and offensive!
)Believing in the children of men is wrong.
)Do not joke about the devil, demons or esorcism.
)Don't write or say "what the hell","Who the heck", " go to hell", "freaking out", "crazy", "damn", "stupid", or words or phrases with similar meaning.
)Do not attribute to the devil actions that do not concern him!
)Attention on what or who you say you love.
)Attention to idolatry and perversion because are wrong !
)Do not wish "happy hallowen" to anyone and do not celebrate this "party".
Halloween its a satanic feast.
)Don't swear !
)Don't curse !
)Don't say in vain God The Father !
)Don't offend the Holy Trinity!
)Do not insult/spread hate or blame those who don't.
)Don't attribute yourself or to others sons of men adjectives or words that don't belong to you or to others sons of men (for example "Master of the masters", "Saint", " Holy" ,"God", "demons", "devil").
)Do not attribute to God Father actions that do not concern him!
)Attention to idolatry and perversion !
)Its wrong to kneel to the sons of men.
)Pay attention to how you use the word "man" and do not insult Man, because the First Man is God the Omnipotent Father!
)Don't spread false information.
)Its wrong the idolatry, so don't kneel on people or kiss the hand of a person.
)Don't give to people adjectives or words that don't represent them.
)Luck and misfortune do not exist.
)Don't bless in your name !
)Attention on what you write or say.
)Attention for what you say thank and to who you say thank.

I adivise you to search by Internet Boanerges blog, because a lot of informations in those blogs they helped me in a period down a little for me and because there is a lot of information that is not found in all blogs.
By committing sins you can do yourself much harm, and it is wrong !
Some of the information I wrote in this message I know, because I read it from some texts of the Boanerges's blogs .

Update sooner please!

Glad to see you update again! I hope you are able to finish the story and finish it the way you want to.

Hey wow. It's been a while since i got a notif from ff. Good luck finishing this!

Nice chapter! Loved it!

I love this so much!

I just finished reading through the story and I like it a lot! The attention to detail is apparent and really adds another level to the story line (which is also great). I think people tend to skimp with the details but I love it when you can see how much thought people put into their stories. It's kind of cool because I think you can really imagine it as it's own story arc.
Criticism wise I really don't have a whole lot of notes, besides a couple of minor OOC moments. That being said, given the general theme of the story and the fact that we haven't necessarily seen the characters in situations like this in the actual anime/manga, I honestly think that when you're reading the story with an open mind, it's not hard to see the different sides of these characters as a possible reality. By developing them all in the way you have, and frequently referencing the actual series throughout the story, it really adds a new perspective to it all. All I can really say is keep it up, you've done a really great job, and this is truly one of the better pieces I've had the opportunity to read.
Thanks for writing! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Amazing job! Love it!

jerza and nalu

Great Update!

YES, IT'S GREAT OMG, PLEASE CONTINUE

Please write some more, I really like your story.

Nalu please ~️

CUTE! TOO CUTE! Loved it!