Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

For sure an interesting concept and pretty good writing! I can't wait to read more, but I do have some technical problems with the first chapter. I'm not sure how old you were when you wrote the first chapter or how much you know of tattoos and piercings, but all of that was way too rushed. Piercings, you're right, are really quick. But tattoos (especially since you specified that this was done in Muggle England) take a significant amount of time to do, especially if they're all filled in with color. There's lining, filling, shading, cleaning, and breaks in between if the pain gets too overwhelming. It's understandable if you're not willing to go back and alter anything since it's been a hot minute, but if you want to then I feel that making that portion of Harry's transformation seem more realistic would improve the chapter significantly. Maybe you can say he went to the Wizarding portion of England to get it, or spread his transformation to a few days (which is still quite unrealistic but is also a lot better than an hour or so), or something. Again, can't wait to read the upcoming chapters.

Love it andnd seriously can't wait for the next update

Please update.

Cool

I really hope that Albus and the others are stopped before they can hurt anyone and that their is actually a spy for Harry there

I love this new chapter and I look forward to more Well done!

great dang it just when I was happy with his death. u rush plots and I think. you might have a young teen mind or just new to long term relationships ether way not bad. I would love to hear weather Tom has seen Harry with his true creauters form and what parts he has or what animal mind he carries we have yet seen much of. that just bref bits. I would love to see you slow there time together maybe Harry sneeks on tom reading and pounce him in play. does Harry show his other more demon form with only his mate or all the time. what defensive part of demon does he have poision in fangs if he his in danger that he can use to defend mate and babies. dose he birth human or eggs does he make animal nest does he not let anyone but mate near babies for days or weeks or months. will Tom kill all those who plan before they get Harry. there are just question on top of my head thoughts. hope to read more I can wait.

So HOTT! Love this fic; can't wait to see what happens next.

I like it!

Hahah that’s one way to distract him

Dumbledore was behind the whole thing. Peter may not be able to tell where he's at but he can take them.

Awesome story can’t wait for more

Love it

lol that was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next:)