If she blushes so much with Isabela's conversations I'm not sure she'd be bold enough to say the word "sex." It would have been entertaining if she phrased sex as "intimate relations" instead.

Something about dancing around some subjects amuses me - I'm not sure if that's juvenile or not. But as a wise man once said the good thing about being an adult is being able to act like a child.

She's like an arrow magnet!

This was wonderful. I love how you intertwined DA2 with your own story about Carver's life as a Warden. So original in its execution and characterization. I adored Meghan and her friendships with Hawke and his companions. It was so relatable in its telling and I look forward to more from you. :-)

Fantastic, I say! Well done, take a bow. I have greatly enjoyed following this story and reading along with Meghan and Carver. Will always be one of my favourites!

I loved this chapter!
I am so glad that Carver is finally realizing how much he and Meg belong together and that she isn't a damsel in distress, he doesn't need to leave her behind.

Especially loved the ending. :)

Awww - wonderfully written ending. Short, but wrapped things up nicely. It was sweet. :3

This story as a whole - absolutely loved it! Your OC was engaging and well-thought out. I liked what she brought to the story - more dynamics between the characters, development in both story and character, and unique plot events. I think you also have a really good handle on Carver's character. We don't get much of him in-game, but you expanded on what was there and filled in gaps that are otherwise unexplained in the game. Especially with him being a Warden - there's not much detail given on his experiences.

Your minor OCs were also fun to read, and sometimes heartbreaking - like Davis. As a whole I enjoyed the story's ups and downs, and had a good time reading this. :) I rarely noticed any mistakes in spelling or grammar, and you always followed-through on plot events and action. Lovely story - that's why I faved it. Keep up the good work! :D

Ooh. I was wondering how their running away would affect the end-game, and I'm glad to see you managed to fit it all in nicely with in-game events. :)

Oh my gosh - did not expect Solona to be injured like that. *hurries to read next chapter*

I'm back - and poor Meghan and Carver! :o

I love where you're going with this! So interesting! So scary! I knew Carver would agree, but I'm worried about Garrett. Will he simply et them go?

Damn. That chapter hit me like an arrow. Good thing they were on the roof!

Meg's healing skills are amazing! I really love the way you describe what she is doing in detail. Poor Alistair, he must be distraught!

Oh my that moment with the Templars scared the piss out of me! Good tension!

I think Carver should listen to Meg. When they separate it scares me lol

I was grinning like an idiot too. Well, sleep is needed. :/ But I will definitely be picking this back up as soon as I can! Again, loving every bit of it. And my inner Carver-fangirl is jumping with joy. :)

So much cute and enough sweetness to rot your teeth - love it so, so much! :3

Awww! You keep tossing sweetness mixed with worry. It makes for a very interesting story. Loved this last bit here.