This story is so good! I'm really happy that I found it, thanks for sharing!

I... cried?

I absolutely love this story. There are not many if any stories with Edward and an oc out there and this one ist verständlich good. Mags is a wonderful character with a great story of her own.

After reading this, I HAD to drop by and review. This is by far one of the greatest AC fics I've read that doesn't have the standard oc gets thrown into AC world or became a part of the brotherhood.

I can only come up with two possible outcomes from the last chapter. One is that Mags really IS dead. Two is that she could have escaped and went back to Philadelphia(?) based on the letter.

I'm just really happy you didn't have her end up with Kenway, it made the whole story end bittersweet and frankly I'm a sucker for those. Thanks for this 18 chaptered gem!

Poor Ed! Fortunately Mags was there to help! Have to see next chapter...*Continues reading*

Kidd's smooth cheeks...D'aaawww Ok ok, back 2 reading!

I dont thinks it's wrong that I saw this one after reading «When we're not looking».You might not even notice by I'll review anyway! I like where it goes..*Goes back to reading next chapter*

Awesome. I can't wait to read it. :D

I'm a little sad it's over, but I look forward to your next piece of work.

Also, I have a few ideas that I would like to share with you. But only if you're receptive to it.

THIS WAS GREAT AND I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT!

Great ending to this. :)

I love how you finished this so quickly!

OH MY GOD, YOU KILLED OFF MAGS?! T-T noooo! I can't wait for the next story, though.

*sniffle* what a sad ending. I just want to say that I really enjoyed your story and hope you keep writing, you have a knack for it :)

My god, the feels...
Amazing..

; w; I enjoyed reading!