Reviews for Particles of Light
MenaPhenom chapter 1 . 12/28/2019
I just had to read this one before moving on. It's beautiful. That's all I can say. Beautiful. Please write a sequel about the baby being born? I love the way you write these two.
KarmaK6581 chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
Baeutiful story, beautiful writing, beautiful couple.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2017
fan or not this is hawt
nomad.eco chapter 1 . 7/24/2017
How I wish I could write as well as you!
MademoiselleRED chapter 1 . 5/17/2017
I always love the idea of Kyoya x Haruhi. For they suited well each other. Kyoya's an epitome of second male lead syndrome which I'm suffering from. And oh I love this ff. Married life & all ,and its so haaawt! Moaaar!~
paige chapter 1 . 5/7/2017
Should have done this ages ago. What a beautiful take on married life for Kyoya and Haruhi. I love it. It's in character, very sexy yet sweet, too. I like the way she tells him her "news" and especially his reaction. Oh, I just love these two soooo much!
Yira chapter 1 . 3/14/2017
another wonderful story from you. Loved it. Quite a lot
Kudos for the good work
xxxSerinaxxx chapter 1 . 2/23/2017
Very romantic and sensual. I loved every bit of it. And their conversation at the end was so sweet. Kyoya's innocent responses and Haruhi's sassiness just made my day blue stars brighter. Haruhi is so witty and funny. And Kyoya had Tamaki moment after she told him, she was pregnant. And the sweet way he wants to keep it in secret. Doesn't want anyone except Haruhi to know what a sweetheart he actually is. Such a sweet story, I wish it was longer. Thank your for writing it.
fourth in line chapter 1 . 8/27/2016
i'm reviewing this coming off of reading some pretty steamy kyotama backseat action from your other story. i guess i expected moer of the same here but it's totally different. don't get me wrong. it's still steamy and i love that but it's romantic and very kyoharu. very few writers write sex scenes well without them sounding like porn, silly romance novels or talktalktalk with no action. this gets it right.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
I'd love to see this continue with Haruhi being pregnant and having the baby.
iamover13 chapter 1 . 6/17/2016
I've read alot of M-rated stories and most of the ones with Kyouya and Haruhi. This is, by far, the most beautiful. And it's hot, too! Thanks for writing this. I've been a bad reviewer since your long story, Clueless in Ouran, has been a favorite of mine for such a long time. But I'm going to read your other Ouran stories now.
Miss Chantelle chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
What a beautiful take on KyoHaru and very much as I see them,too. I love it and would love to see this expand.
claraowl chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
That was great! :D Very cute, very clever.
dnt wory b hapy chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
Holy smokin aces! Not only was this well-written (duh), but it was steamy and sweet and just as I think they'd be as married. Wahhhh! I want a Kyoya! Loved the bit about Ranka too. So cute. Will you be adding to this maybe? I vote YES!
Senile-felineS chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
This was very good. I liked the sex scene but my absolute best part was the banter afterwards. So few fanfic writers seem to pay attention to the aftermath of sex, they just tack it on at the end of an M-rated story and that is how it ends. I'm pretty guilty myself but it always helps to read really good stories to learn how to improve.

Also, this story gave me 5-odd new words for my vocab. So thanks for that. On to your other stories!
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