Well. Fuck.

No you don't understand, 'Tuna I HAVE to hug you-
(This is amazing!)

I cried. So. Much

This is really good! I like the way you actually put Latula's disbelief in the story. Over all noice!

Well done! This really captures Mituna's final thoughts and mindset just before losing his mind. I wrote a huge story on what I think happened during the Alpha trolls session (still in progress) and while my explanation for Mituna getting the brain damage was a bit different and less vague, yours is probably a whole lot closer to canon.

Please update soon

Wow... can I just say that you have managed to convey emotion so well that I cried Niagara Falls at the end of this story. I've read many a fan-fiction that can't manage to do that in a few dozen chapters. Yet here you are with a 1,000 words and you used them to their full extent. I think a round of applause is in order. Thank you!

Aw jeez. This is good.

Excellent work, I love how at the end, Mituna is just uncertain about what will happen to him. Loved it :D

interesting please continue.