If you're going to write a story about gay characters, you need to say that in your summary. You being unfair to your readers who don't read those types of stories.

Dumbledore did not send Harry to the Dursley's on this exact date. That would have been his first birthday. James and Lily were still alive at that time. If that was the case, what happened on Halloween? How could Lily die for Harry if he didn't even life there? I'm not sure you've your facts straight.

Hermione would never write "Me and my parents" because that is not correct grammar. It is "My parents and I."

i always thought the whole love thing was stupid as all hell in the books.

love it please write more

Well well well Prongslet is all grown up! And deeply in love with Hermione, my kind of chapter! Loved it! And Sam and Ron came out, way to go!
That dream is worrying in the extreme!

Hi, I hope that you don't stopped writing, because this story is really great. Sorry for my terrible English.
EKP

This is so goooood! I love this spin on things, and Sirius was always one of my favourite characters, so I never really got over his death. I'm so glad that you keep Sirius alive in this. Great job!

Nie mogę się doczekać następnego rozdziału. Wybacz, że komentarz jest nie po angielsku, ale nie chcę Cię katować moim językiem obcym ;) W każdym razie, opowiadanie jest świetne :)
EKP

Congrats to Ron, winning almost fair and square! I can't help but be worried about Abigail... Something is off about her! And the stranger on the grounds... Who is that?! Can't wait for more! The plot tightens!

I thought this was supposed to be for K! Chapter 14 should be rated T! And some words in the chapters are not for K. I would not want a 10 year old to be reading this kind of stuff!

Okay that was weird and very mysterious! Can't wait to find out who that mystery person is!

I won't follow your story because I don't read pairing H/Hermione.

Okay Abigail is officially bad news, that cold chill did it .. Is she evil? Or playing both sides? And she used to be Sirius' girlfriend! I do wonder! This is going to be interesting!

As always my deepest compliments on your story

I'm done.