I'm not gonna lie, I was super tempted to read the sequel first, but I thought Nope. We have to do this right. And I'm glad I did! This was awesome and sexy. I really like how you write Makoto's character; he is super cute and sexy!adorable. I know I'm not finished reading them all yet, but have you ever thought of writing one where Makoto gets some dominant time? I'd be interested to see the story you come up with.

I'm so excited to read more! Excellent job!
FH

I am seriously loving all the MakoHaru! Very, very hot...*whew*

Gosh I loved this to no end! I love how it started all cute and fluff and then all hot damn smut! I just have to say it, I would die and kill if I could have Makoto if he's even half of this in bed *cough cough* love it loud! *cough cough*
And yeah, the "and Makoto finally realizes that they aren't, in fact, screaming a broadcast of we just had sex" put such a hilarious image in my head that I'm still chuckling over it.

And finally (sorry I love to rant) You little A/N makes me want to hive five you! I've written things like this, meaning smut, in my classroom when I'm bored, and read yaoi mangas in the library so seeing that I'm not the only one who does that is awesome

Wonderful!

Thi is umf! You're wonderful!