pretend this update is for chapter 25, it wont let me comment there again XD

when will you update? I cant wait!

when is the next update on this? I wanna read more! this is awesome!

OH MY GOD THANK YOU! This was amazing, you're awesome :) I got so desperate with the whole 'Magnus is hurt' situation I almost cried. PLEASE don't take too long for the next chapter lol

I'm very happy you have updated. It was a very interesting chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

OMG THIS IS SO AMAZING! I mean, I read it all in less than a day, I couldn't stop. Your writing is amazing, congrats:) PLEASE post the next chapter, I'm gonna die here

I forgot I wasn't reading Clare...how's that for a review?

I have a few problems with some word use and a few tense issues (flipped from third to first and back) but otherwise I've loved it.

Now could you please give me more?

Thank you :-)

This story is more more interesting with each chapter!

Great chapter, mathieu is horrible and disgusting, I'm glad Alec was able to calm him down and nothing bad happened, and I feel sorry for camille and in all honesty, I'd love for Magnus and Alec to become parents but I hate the idea of them having kids with Helen and Aline, it just seems so wrong and I don't like it so I'm hoping the pregnancy doesn't take... I'm looking forward to your next chapter

Well, that happened... Lol! That was a pretty epic chapter, I'm not really sure what to say except WOW! Great job!

This is such an incredible story, I really enjoy reading it. Thank you so much for this latest chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Omg so many things are happening! Isabelle is pregnant, Paul having a crush on Mathieu and now Alec! I'm feeling so bad for my baby! I hope he is okay.

PREGNANT? D: Simon's? please be Simon's...
awww Maggie pie, you're Alec will always be yours. He loves u!
heh :)) now Team Clace has yet to have babies...
thanks for the update! :3

This is one of the best fanfics i have read on this site. I like how this has its own plot and dynamics yet still has elements from the original series. It's wonderfully well-written and I look forward to the next update.

I am actually very happy with how the Simon and Camille situation is going. Some things are becoming much clearer while new problems are also popping up. Poor Isabelle, is she going to be alright? I'm slightly worried at the moment. Now, with the agreement of two children so each couple can raise a baby.. That makes me like the arrangement much more. I was against it mostly because of the unfairness, but this situation is monumentally more appealing and I'm actually quite excited now. Omg Alec is gonna make such cute kids!

Best wishes,
Wolfie

I SO CALLED IT. YES. BOOYAH. SIMON MY BABY, HE'S MORTAL AGAIN AND FUCKING ALIVE. I'M SO PUMPED.

I'm worried about him, Izzy, and Peter now though.. Peter has turned into a very kind and genuine young man. Please let him find his happiness. And is Simon gonna be all babbley and weird like Camille? I just don't want everyone suffering over it for too long. Oh, and this tutor guy must go soon he creeps me out. I'd like to see a few of the interactions with Camille, mainly involving Alec, but with Magnus and possibly Simon at some point too. I just feel that being mortal should put things into perspective for her. She's been a vampire for so long I feel she's really lost her humanity and that's what's being restored. She's a pitiful creature at the moment. As for the baby situation... I believe a talk is in order. I'd like to hear how the girls are thinking since we don't see them very often. I don't understand how someone could be a donor and not feel an attachment to the child. I'm hoping both couples get their families though. Hope to see an update soon.

Best wishes,
Wolfie