This is one of my favourite episode fics I’ve ever read - Sarah is the perfect mix of sympathetic, batshit and threatening. It’s so easy to imagine this fic slotting into season 1 - really well done!

i loved it!

Very nice. It actuaslly reads like an early episode in the series at times. Too bad they botched this same concept at least 4 times as the show ran it's course.

Well done.

AK

this is what lack of empathy for the opponent gets you. Are you alive you ever going to continue this.

wow

All your Smallville stories are awesome! They're well-written and fun to read, but it's not perfect, no one on this website is, me included. What I would like to see out of any future stories is some longer chapter lengths and a little more attention to some proofreading mistakes. Other than that, keep up the fantastic work!

*gasp* what happends next? Please update! XDD

Wow! This read just like an episode of Smallville! It was terrific! Your characterizations were perfect! I am amazed (and glad) that you had Martha get through to Clark without the all too convienient use of kryptonite. I always find it exciting when Clark gets dangerous for awhile.

i know i stumbled on this story late, but i really enjoyed both the story and the humor you weaved into it-i just felt compelled to convey that i enjoyed it!

Great, please sontinue!

Bah I can't believe you ended the story like that :P
We want more! I really like how you described the scene when Clark just got ordered to attack the girls.
I'd like to see new chapters and a Clark who can somehow resist the effect... He could do that by thinking of Chloe...:) (I'm a Chlark fan!)

Love it! Absolutely love it! I'm really hoping that wasn't the end. I'd love to see more of this.

The last thing Martha said was kinda funny. (I'm cruel; I know) and was a nice break from the action.

Loved Lex's line about being there to rescue them and Chloe's retort about having it covered; it was cute.

Still really loving this.

Towards the end of this, you had me feeling bad for Sarah. But then she made Clark love her and forced the other guys to attack Chloe, Martha and Lana. I still can't help but feel a little bad for her though.

Can't wait to see what it is Sarah did to nip their plan in the bud.