THIS. IS. HOT.
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(and i love it so much, i'm guilty)

That was some hot morning sex right there. I wouldn't mind waking up to the sort of fun :) you did a really good job of writing this. I really needed to read a good one shot and I'm glad this was the first one that I picked to read.

Uh...*sobbing* I don't know if I want to watch Free! ever again. That was...ah, mature. I cried my childhood out.

OMG this was absolutely mind-boggling. Haru and Rin are perfect together! Good job, man!

hot! you need to make haru's version. i would love to read about haru being tied up and fucked

That was...PERFECTION!

Sooo good mooooore please!

That was seriously hot!
And funny in the right places! Wonderful, wonderful!
Keep them coming man, really, really do!