| Reviews for Unraveled |
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CaneVerde chapter 8 . 6/1 ItaFemNaru, ShisuFemNaru, GaaFemNaru, Tenten x Shisui, Naruto x Kurotsuchi, Kirabi(Killer B) x Tsunade |
cassiejones07 chapter 9 . 5/18 I hope all is well with you during this covid-19 crisis. This is a really good story I just came across it please continue. I'd love to see where you take it I also like this Shikamaru and fem naru fiction pairing. |
Lyryenn chapter 9 . 3/6 Naru/Shika 3 |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/27 Ship them hard. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27 Awesome. Too bad it has been abandoned... such a shame. |
munchin munchkin chapter 9 . 2/9 Love this fic and I hope you pick it back up someday soon! |
00esoteric00 chapter 9 . 1/29 I love it! Please come back and update. Very enjoyable. I need more! |
HashtagJustMonika chapter 9 . 9/2/2019 This is an amazing story:) |
Guest chapter 9 . 9/2/2019 Please update, I love it, do Naru x Shikamaru |
AkiHime20 chapter 9 . 5/5/2019 My favori is Naru x Itachi, Naruto x Kakashi (time travel) or the rare Naruto x Madara (time travel too) |
Aureum chapter 9 . 3/24/2019 loving this! hope u update soon! -A |
Lilting Lithium chapter 6 . 1/30/2019 this has been my favorite chapter so far. idk, it was funny and the characters were playing off eachother so well and despite the absolute mess team 7 is in any context i could still feel the underlying chemistry between them. not to mention the leap in your writing for this chapter. maybe it was just my imagination because interesting things were happening, aka plot, but still until this chapter it felt like a very steady climb in quality. im glad to see more of content/stable/happy naru slipping thru the cracks in her trauma and often jaded moods. If i did have to say something negative it would be in how nar often talks. i understand she was/is an adult and so had a more adult vocabulary but her style of speech can come off overly formal sometimes and it jarrs you out of the moment. that could just be me personally though. im pretty certain this story is on indefinite haitus and you likely wont see this, but i look forward to reading the remaining chapters you’ve left |
AJ244 chapter 9 . 12/14/2018 This is a lovely story thank you for writing it. |
Guest chapter 9 . 12/14/2018 Update |
SKitsuneDragon chapter 9 . 12/5/2018 Please come back and wright more. I really love your work. |