Cute. Check for spelling and grammatical errors.

If you are a native speaker then you should be ashamed. If you're not then how come your story holds a decent level and still there are countless stupid errors and mistakes...

Awwww this was short by it was so beautiful ! It was amazing ! I've never read anything like it ! So well informed with a few details that are just right ! But dammm ! Lol

Nicely done c:

Awe I loved it