| Reviews for Hero |
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  I'mdangerous chapter 1 . 6/4 I don't know why but I cried at this chapter. Her life was so sad. Goes to show you that not everyone gets a beautiful life. This was beautiful(sad but beautiful) story. I'll forever cherish it. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2019 Whoa |
 PheonixQueen15 chapter 1 . 3/17/2019 This is awesome and even more twisted than the first. |
| Hanako chapter 1 . 5/9/2018 I want to read that "what if..." versión! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2017 This story needs editing, there are a fair amount of missing words and other errors, considering how short it is that is just not good enough, the author obviously needs a beta reader. A boring ending for someone just acting out, this story didn't really feel like a story, but more the outline of one made it difficult to care, there is simply not enough words put into fleshing the character out, and where it mattered she kept failing again and again. A very unsatisfying protagonist. |
| soul of the kitsune chapter 1 . 2/2/2017 OH MY GOD. I loved this so much! |
| JustForAQusestion chapter 1 . 1/28/2017 Please write a 'good" one! This one depressed me :( |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2016 Good show. Makes me wish there was more of it |
| jj chapter 1 . 9/15/2016 i rally love this it was assume please do the 'what if ' scenario |
| Meilinfan chapter 1 . 9/13/2016 OMG Re read it and realised I had forgotten to review. First of hall I wanted to say that I began to like oc in Naruto thanks to your other fic All the world is a stage and I have completely fallen in love with Monster and its sequel. I hope you will write a What if Kama was good because I want her to live a happy life and have her happy ending 。・・(_)・・。 |
| Ibskib chapter 1 . 4/2/2016 This could use a bit more proofreading, noticed things like: then - than to - too like hero - like a hero and laughing his face about the truth - laughing at his face, revealing the truth |
| Mercedes Wolfcry chapter 1 . 12/14/2015 I would most like to read a story where she was good~ or if you had stretched this into an epic fic. : Twas an awesome read~ |
| LittleWesties9 chapter 1 . 5/13/2015 That's just morbid. I can't believe she killed Naruto's son! Wow just wow, that was just a big kick in the guts. Great story but just ... Yeah... |
| thepyeman chapter 1 . 4/28/2015 I usually don't review stories that I read but this one and the prequel are great, I first thought it should of been longer but after finishing this one it all fit together perfectly. Well done |
| Manillalu chapter 1 . 4/28/2015 Noooooo! Kakashi! I thought it was so sweet! But then! Aaaagh! |
