ohhhhhh! I loved this soooooo muchhhh!

This is just LOVELY. You understand their back-and-forth comments so well, and the sort of unknown tension here is so in character. I think as well they would never rush into anything, so I love how you left it. :)

Nice

This was adorable. I reaaaaally loved it a whole lot.
And the title was perfect. ;)

CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE
This was amazing! I can't wait to read more (wink wink cough cough) :)

I really like jealous Simmons

This was wonderful. I loved witnessing Simmons's jealousy and how she tried to be considerate of what Fitz was feeling even though it conflicted with hers and then her not being able to voice anything even when asked. Loved that bit where she's 'reminding Fitz that she's a woman too' and I was very interested in how he watched her at the end when exclaiming how someone "so beautiful and intelligent could have nothing to say" yeah Fitz I can see who your comparison is. ;)

Is this a one shot? I would be delighted if it wasn't!

Is this a one-shot? I hope not. It's a great start and has a lot of potential. I really hope there's more.

I loved this! I was kinda expecting them to kiss at the end but at the same time I wasn't because I don't ship them 100% romantically, so I love that the ending was so lovely and not necessarily romantic, since it's normal to be jealous of a friend and I love their friendship. Did that even make sense? Also, thank you for exploring Skye and Jemma's friendship which I also love. Amazing job!

I think the story is fantastic. It does feel as it's unfinished though.