... there is nooo way Minato will talking that LONG
afterall, he is a man with few words.
what, it is indeed P3 Protagonist's personalities is determined by the player, BUT that is for PROTAGONIST, not Makoto Yuki nor Minato Arisato. Those two character personality are already selected by respective writer, Minato Arisato for manga and Makoto Yuuki for movie.

and here, for Minato Arisato is shown to be fairly calm and passive, and is characterized as drowsy or tired with a comically large appetite. And he speaks only when adressed. Yours is too OOC.

...ya know I like how you used RWBY Characters in this .

you should reboot this

More rwby?
wtf i like the story but the appearance of rwby characters makes no sense

why is pyrrha from rwby here?

Holy hell was this chapter a mess. Great concept but your characterization of Minato was terrible and utterly ruined this. The pacing was also incredibly jarring.

I liked the chapter!

this is not minato... this is like those shitty naruto fics wherr you can just replace the name of the character with your name and it wouldnt even fucking matter...

A decidedly entertaining take on Infinite Stratos and a fun handling of characters.

What a delightful take on a crossover, the character interactions and shenanigans are to die for.

This is both decidedly hilarious and quite entertaining.

The story is really confusing. It feels like a stand alone story of INfinite Stratos, instead of a cross over. Few typos, nothing too major. Though, It feels rather rushed with the pacing. Some more emotional building of the characters would be nice.

Ha! yes Minato ! laugh at their pain!

ok that last bit was pretty cool

10 terabytes of space on a tiny ass mp3? Well shit. Welcome to the future.