I loved this fanfic - thank you for writting it and bringing warmth to this little heart that ships Shinya and Akane an awful lot .

Love this. I hope you will update and share more chapters about it. You don't have to write a lemon but some euphemisms and metaphors to imply sex or whatever you have in mind. Thanks for sharing

Aww I love this story

Great great chapter and great great story...and of course we are still here. If you continued this, I would be very very happy! (Possibly a good ending? God knows if Shinya and Akane owe it)

Actual writing is a little rough, but it's the thought that counts and the thought was sweet. I would have liked to see a little more exposition and storyline outside of "they're training and training some more and they like each other," but that may be personal preference. Cute overall.

I'm catching up, exactly a year after your last update, life can really be a biatch XD
I missed very eventful chapters, the one where Akane actually put in action her lessons and the one where they acknowledge what they're feeling.
Enjoy while you can guys, because who knows what's coming next.

Are you still there? Not complaining (I just don't have the right XD), just checking.

Hi there! As a suggestion why don't you bring up the fact that kougami's psycho pass is getting less cloudy again? It could bring a whole new factor into play that would be fun. Oh and remember not to make them into a mushy couple! Cos they ain't like that really so I don't think that they would be if they did get together Superb and update soon

Re: Hype

Just out of curiosity, just how much of the Psycho-pass world are you changing? I'm asking this, because I noticed some facts wrong throughout this story. For example, the hues. Clear is turquoise blue and it gets muddier when it starts to turn greenish. Another is the decomposer mode, which is meant for machines, like the robot dog Kougami shot at. The mode to kill humans is the eliminator mode.

This is such a fantastic story! Thank you so much for writing it

That was way too big of a paragraph and super hard to follow and read. Each time a person speaks it should start on a new line by it's self.
Ditto with them talking back and forth, a space should be between the lines as well.
Crying into his arms and then sexy time is much more preferred. Drunk times are normally regrettable time.

Whaattt, that was so much! They beat the fuck outta them, good for you Akane!
Still though, now she's not doing so well. Get yours numbers and colors better D:
Showing up at doors late at night are never a good thing.

Well sshhiiitttt, getting found out in such an awkward position is awful when you need a crowd for once. Worse to even find out you know need to get out alive.

Awwww sshhiiittt.
Kagari you little shit, messing with the two. Got your ass beat for that haha
"This kiss won't mean a thing" jk haha we're both idiots and now utterly hopeless.
You gotta love Shion!

SO weird that people don't know how to swim, now a days or even to think that in the future... Huh.
I've known how to swim since a 2 year old. So cute that he's teaching her and brought the floating device to help.
He can heellpp yyoouuuu but you gotta let him in girl. Go get iittt.

Ouch man, poor Kougami. She went from stroking his ego to beating it, ow!
I mean, he got what he wanted kind of, just the wrong situation.
Badass to read though, to imagine them actually sparring now.