This is good :)..it’s been 6 years though..there’s still a chance for this right? :)...if this is an ichihime story then I really want this to be completed hehe..only ichi and hine for pair..it’s interesting they are in act to be siblings..pretending to be bro and sis then they will fall hehe

Love it

Seems pretty cool! keep working at it.

Great story!

I liked it a lot! I hope you continue but it was nice. Despite being an IchiHime shipper this didn't bother me either. I do hope you won't be pairing Ichigo with anyone.

Chad isn't my favorite but I think that's personal taste in regards to his character type. The line about ' Orihime's terrible marriage proposal' was hillarious. I'm super curious to see what happens in the future.

I really like how you made it so that Yoruichi still has strong contact with the upper parts of the Gotei Thirteen but Ichigo will need to be careful, Urahara is one of the worst people in existance to play mind games with.

Great job! Thanks for the story!

You! Why did you stop?! This plot, this story is awesome! You should continie this and not let it go to waste well its not wasted cause im still gonna read this even though its just two chaps hey whatever happened to you please continue this well that is a bit selfish

This story shows a lot of promise, especially since it only has two chapters. The idea of Chad and Orihime's powers changing to be zanpakuto powers has a lot of potential. Your early incorporation of Yoruichi and Hanataro is also interesting, as it gives them a way to change things even before they graduate the academy.

Given that it's been almost two years since it was updated, I'm guessing that your ideas and motivation for this story aren't that strong, but all the same I hope you'll update again. Ichigo's inability to remain in the background provides good entertainment after all.

Interesting start!

I cannot wait for more. This is soo interesting!

noooope! nope nope nopety nope nope nope! you don't just leave us hanging! I'm dieing to see what happens next! update soon? *pouts with puppy eyes*

Really great story. I'm so curious to see how Yoruichi, Kisuke, and the others will connect/interfere with the trio. Thanks for posting!

meh this is good.

Don't give up! Continue with the story!

me likey this

They act like Orihime will go after them when Chad tells her about them being caught. *grin*

if your really going to keep up with this story than you should update it some because some people only watch fics that have updated within the last year
even if the update is just a short "I have not abandoned this fic" or "this story has now been abandoned" it would suffice