I like how the emotions and thoughts going through Jaune and Blake's heads are what it's like to feel this strongly for someone in real life. It makes me wonder how a relationship between them would pan out in the show.

thats not what "je ne sais quoi" means thats it bye

I don't know dude, if you ask me Jaune and Blake would of made away better couple together, more than Pyrrha and Sun ever would, and I don't think them being different would matter, I mean apart from being faunus what does Sun and Blake have in common or even Jaune and Pyrrha for that matter.

This is history right here.
This was the fic that inspired SSC to write the original Auburn, which in turn inspired couer to start 'one good turn deserves another'. That was his first fic and from that he grew into perhaps the best writer in rwby fandom. So many brilliant fics wouldn't exist without this. It all started here...

*Bows in respect

Great one shot. Good characterisation and pacing. Keep up the good work.

Yes, this could have happened. That certain something, yeah... Points for having Goodwitch-sensei have to step in.

Short but lovely and that ending lmao.

My dear goodness, what a gem...

It makes sense really, and the progression just seems so natural that there's not even wanting for further scenes and such to narrate the progression. In other words, you've done in less than 2k words than what most can do with 20k... and it's lovely. Thanks for writing this!

-TPS

This, and the early chapters of The Games We Play was what drove me into Blake/Jaune pairing.
How to make an uncompatible characters like each other is the treat of these stories. Watching them struggle, that is the core of Jaune/Blake story.

"The two that got it on during class" would have to be one of the funniest titles I have ever heard.

The way you use words to describe their relationship - The perfect conjuction of Imagery and Characterization-the subtlety of a sword, with the bluntness of a hammer.

This fic is like a Snickers' Bar; Sweet overall, but with different layers of flavor.

I like this fic. Thanks for writing a pretty piece.

Oh my Gabe, this is awesome

I've probably read this story a dozen times and I'm just now leaving a review. I've never really been sure how to put into words how I feel about this. That's just a testament to how great it is though. I love everything about it. The beautiful way in which you weave words and express the growing attraction between the two of them without using a single word of dialogue is astounding.

I can honestly say this is the fiction that got me into the Jaune x Blake pairing and is what inspired me to start my own fiction. You are an inspirational author and I felt I absolutely had to leave you a review on this story to let you know just that.

Even having said that I feel this doesn't convey how strongly I enjoyed this but in the end I'm glad I tried. Thank you so much for writing this incredible story.

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What just happened?

...Wow.

...I feel like I need a cold shower. Skillful writing!