Reviews for That Moment
meow mew chan chapter 8 . 12/13/2016
Hey I know my review is a few years to late lol but I wanted to say how great the story was it really made me laugh, and I was reading and just hoping sasuke would take charge of his life lol, I love the way you portrayed the characters I really enjoyed what I read! :)
Kari Saotome chapter 8 . 11/11/2015
You don't know how much I've been squilling and making all kinds of Chubaka sounds over here! Loving the story so far. Naruto/Itachi friendship is the best always! Every time Sasuke opens his mouth his foot comes out first -chuckles- we'll see what he does now~
Thanks for the story!
OrangeFan chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
Usually I stay away from first person pov's, but I will definitely be making an exception this time! I absolutely LOVE the last line in this chapter! I pushed through the the beginning (because of my own personal preferences I almost didn't want to) but then I did, and I don't regret it. I haven't read good fanfiction for awhile and I'm so happy I stumbled upon this, keep up the good work!
xcherriblossom chapter 8 . 4/15/2015
This story... I am so in love with it! Your humour is hilarious, and I love the way you have written Sasuke; your writing style is beautiful! I haven't read a fanfiction which I have enjoyed as much as this one in a long time! And, I'm guessing, Itachi's girlfriend is Sakura *cry*.
But, I can't wait for an update; I have really enjoyed this story so I can't wait for an update :)
y0rp chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
I really hope you continue this story, it's really good. I never read someone write Sasuke's pov so well. Please update soon lol, and maybe try to make a day when you're free so you can update every week or two (: hope to see you return soon.
wowzerz chapter 8 . 1/2/2015
Hello, first time reader! Love you're writing style, really captivating. I especially like the "moments" when you pause. If thats the right word. Like when you leave spaces for the anticipation to start. For example the ending in ch 6. It looked like I was reading a script for a manga, cuz I can picture the glitter and sparkles when sasuke and naruto shared their first kiss!

I also love the dialogue when sasuke and naruto bicker. Its seems a bit real coming from the characters, fitting great with their personalities. ALSO having sasuke and itachi having a brotherly brawl was funny. Keep up with the updates because its really good!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/6/2014
Please update!
VampirePrinssess chapter 8 . 11/15/2014
Shadow- I seriously love Sasuke's and Itachi's interactions they are so funny and adorable. I can take it!
Isy- hey, Naruto and Sasuke's intersections are fun too haha
Shadow- I hope this deal with his mom works
Isy- she totally does know he's gay
Shadow-aha haha well great chapter. Update soon
Carnival Poet chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
Really well written, keep up the good work Plz n Thnx!
Guest chapter 8 . 10/30/2014
UGH! How could you make Fugaku Uchiha seem like a heartless asshole one time and then turn hik into a loving papa bear the next?! D: i love it. I just hope you woudn't make Sasuke seem like such a ball-less kid, he's so much more than that! Srsly, MAN UP SASUKE PLEASE! Love Naruto here though, you got his personality on the dot! And Itachi, love him as well, but when did I not? Who woudn't love Itachi fucking Uchiha anyway, just so goddamn awsome, specialy in this fic! UPDATE SOON! CUZ I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHO ITACHI'S GIRLFRIEND IS! I have a strange feeling it's Sakura... Which is okay... I still hope it's someone else though. UPDATE SOOOOOOOONNNNNNN!
Iris chapter 8 . 10/27/2014
I love your fic so much! It would be so much more popular if you updated consistently. It's been almost 1 year and this is only the 8th chapter.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/6/2014
I'm so happy to see a new chapter! This was great. I know that this is a Sasu/Naru fic, but I just LOVE Itachi and Sasuke's relationship! That's what I get excited about the most when I see a new chapter. I'm not too crazy about the fact that Itachi has a girlfriend and is in love though... I just hope it isn't someone that I don't like because I really love everything about this fic right now! No pressure, but please don't take too long to update this time! (:
Shadeofblue chapter 8 . 9/21/2014
Omg I love your Sasuke. Haha. I love how he's obviously so interested in Naruto but always ends up insulting him haha. At first I thought Fugaku was an ass but I think he's not what he appears and I believe he truly wants Sasuke to be happy. Can't wait to see how Sasuke will plan to woo Naruto since he sort of screwed everything up with that phone call haha. I wonder who Itachi's girlfriend is! And naughty Sasuke. Thinking about Naruto in a naughty way when speaking to your mother heh. Absolutely can't wait for the next installment!
Azilli chapter 8 . 9/20/2014
Whoohooo your back thank you thank you thank you for the update loved it.
ZombifiedWulf chapter 8 . 9/20/2014
I'm so happy Mikoto seems to play a somewhat important role. She's usually just a meanngless side character. I love her personality in this fic! I'm very excited for the next chapter.
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