Hm a little dark and scary i like that keep up the good tedious work!

Good so far. PLease write The Root. I'd like to see them get away somehow. Are you a Ron and Hermione person?

I like how you wrote it. A nice cliff hanger too. Some people can't write good cliff hangers.

Exceptional! I like the way you started out in the middle of the action and then moves forth to the injury and just when we could have had a clue to what was going on... BAM! - cliffhanger. Excellent. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next part.

Oh wow! We need more info here! This is great!

Cool. One of few fics I've read lately and gotten a good vibe out of. There aren't many particularly good writers left, I'm sad to say. I've given up on reading most of the newly posted fics for that reason, but this was good. Well written, but formatting could be better. I'll have to remember to check for the next part.

Put the next part out soon please!

More, please - don't leave us hanging!

I don't get it!