bruh... yes just yes

I don't usually read the stuff and I was blown away by the real nature I could really imagine the display on on the candle it was beautiful it would enjoy sex as the game but did in a very beautiful way and I loved it it should love not just lust. It wasn't nasty it was unconditional love that two people share. Also how do you get your punctuation so perfect and the spelling so perfect I mean I'm a spelling bee champ and I still have problems what I'm writing my story so... I'm impressed and a bit jealous as well

Deliciously intense. Something that stood out to me - and not sure if you did this intentionally - is the visual layout of the story. The majority of new sentences begin on a new line, and this helps quicken the story's overall pace, adding to that building sense of anticipation between Mako/Korra and then carrying through to their rigorous coupling. Had to smile at the ending; it's too easy to envision these two causing some many of bending related accident during sex. How many passionately fucking firebenders does it take to burn the house down?

Great story

Very, very smutty... Me like ;) lol great story

Hoo my. that was... wow, is it hot in here? A-am I in Mako and Korra's apartment because I don't think that my face should be this warm... :D. Very nice. Very, very, VERY nice.

SNO.

This was absolutely amazing. Once in a while, I take a break from my own writing and I read an actual book or fanfiction. I have to say, this really inspired me with a few scenes that I'm writing. Thanks for writing this fantastic piece of work. :)

This was a very good smut. Really good. I loved your pacing of it all, it wasn't rushed nor elongated to the extent that I'd lose interest. The atmosphere of the story was also great it felt they loved each other, like I was a intruder in a very intimate moment. But I didn't mind ;) haha. I am surprised your work doesn't have more reviews because this work amazing.

HOLY FREAKIN CRAP! That was one of the best sexual Makorra fanfics I ever read. One of my favorite Makorra sexual stories :D You did a really good job on it. There was no mistakes. I seen people on here have a lot of mistakes and I do too when I type/write my stories because I write/type fast xD And you did a really good job having no mistakes. It must have took you a lot of time to do this. OMG! O_O Thank you for making this Makorra fanfic. I really enjoyed it a lot :D