Loved it, but wish it was longer or had a sequel

great xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Is there to be a follow-up?

*giggles* love it!

Hot damn!

sequel please thank you loved it

awesome!
i had so much fun reading this
quality smut :)

-laenamoradadeHERMIONE

Oh, my, that was hot!

It was great!

I like this story so far.

I think Lily should break positive relationship with James. And Severus and Lily should get together and have children together.

Unlike Harry, I don't think James is really "good".

James Potter is not Harry Potter. He is a bully who like to bully Severus at a ratio of 4 to 1- "The marauders vs Snivellus". That's not "self defense" when you choose to confront your "enemy" at 4 to 1.

James is a bully who chooses to cover a serious crime-one of attempted murder. Instead of insisting that Sirius be punished fully and seriously for the crime of trying to feed Severus to a werewolf. James and Dumbledore covered up the crime. Sirius also "got away" with little to no punishment. James could have at least broke his friendship with Sirius if he has a sense of goodness. But he is not "good", James just stop the incident to prevent Remus from biting or killing anyone and getting into serious trouble.

Also, even after the attempted murder, James, Sirius and friends STILL secretly bullies Severus until at least 7th year according to Sirius.

So Lily should do as she claims. If "mudblood" incident happens, then she should see that it's mostly James fault because Severus only said that in the heat of the moment under extreme bullying-embarrassment by James.

LMFAOO I can't imagine Fich's face when he comes back ahahhahahhaha