| Reviews for Whispers In The Dark |
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Yuuri Tsuzuki chapter 28 . 9/20/2017 Please update |
Orochi-Dragon14 chapter 27 . 7/15/2017 I love how you didn't go straight into the exorcism right away. It was nice seeing everyone's worries. I especially loved Yuri's about death & Wolfram comforting him. Sara's devotion to protect Yuri is also nice. Yuri just makes (almost) everyone adore him. He just has that gift about him. Let me know when you start posting up on A03 (is that right?) So I can r&r this. I love it so much! :) |
Orochi-Dragon14 chapter 26 . 7/13/2017 I'm not sure how I've been missing these chapters! My gods! I'm so sorry! Please forgive me, Hikari? Like always, your characters are always spot on! I love how yoy do them! Poor Greta! She's so worried about her fathers & their fates. She's so cute & helpful. I loved Contrat's & Shiouri's conversation. No one can blame them for how they feel. They want Yuri's best interest at heart. But Yuri does need to decide for himself. His mother certainly can help heal him. :) Damn! That's crazy, but it's the only thing that makes sense. I do wonder how Belar got his hands on such powerful poison. Lol! Wolfram is hilarious! "...not until you're old and grey and we've been married for at least 50 years!" Lmao! Both of them are so truamized by this. Yuri doesn't know who to blame. He's just not like that. I'm sure he'd blame himself before anyone else. Again, sorry about this! Your writing is so good. The only real problem you have is tense. Sometimes you go into present & sometimes past. It's hard not to though. But other than that the content and characterization is flawless :). I've missed your writing so much! Don't worry I'll read & review your other chappies as well :) Oh and happy birthday! :) |
Magykool chapter 28 . 9/1/2016 Ahh man, now I have to get an AO3 account so I can review there instead! I'm so glad this is continuing as I absolutely love this story! |
coopt98 chapter 26 . 5/2/2016 My goodness its been so long! Poor boys... They're kind of broken arnt they? But hopefully this exorcism works! I have a feeling the worst has yet to come.. Update soon! :) |
Magykool chapter 26 . 4/23/2016 Desperate times call for desperate measures. Greta is so adorable! You've really kept the characters going with their personality, I love this story! |
OWLSIES chapter 25 . 2/27/2016 I like this chapter. Can't wait till the kick belar ass. Thank you for the wonderful update :) |
Orochi-Dragon14 chapter 25 . 2/26/2016 Such an amazing chappie! I really like how everything is coming into play! I can't blame Wolfram for lying, but Yuri's right he needs to tell him things so they can fix it together. One thing: you seem to go from past tense to present tense a lot. I think a lot of people do, but I figured I should let you know. Anyway, great chappie! I can't wait for the update! |
OWLSIES chapter 24 . 1/27/2016 Nice chapter. Look forward for more |
coopt98 chapter 24 . 1/22/2016 It's been so long~! I'm glad you updated and we got to see the moah. I think the conversation between wolfram and yurri will be a little awkward lol update soon~! |
Orochi-Dragon14 chapter 24 . 1/21/2016 Awesome chapter :). Things are getting good. The mind scape was really cool. Wolfram & Yuri definitely need to talk. Can't wait! Jghb |
Coopt98 chapter 23 . 9/10/2015 Gah! Of course when they get back there's still no peace for our boys :( oh well. This adventure isn't over yet. Update soon~! |
Orochi-Dragon14 chapter 23 . 8/27/2015 This was awesome, Hikari. I really love how you had Yuri not want to kill Belur. It's definitely Yuri, but some people you just have to kill. Aww poor Yuri :( I hope he & Wolfram get better soon... |
OWLSIES chapter 23 . 8/27/2015 Yay an update. Love this story. :D |
Orochi-Dragon14 chapter 22 . 6/21/2015 Ahhh this was so epic! Hggjhvgh I really loved the part with Gisella & Muratra. I hope Yuri gets his powers back. :(. Hearing the capture over again was so heartbreaking! And poor Shouri! He just wants to see his brother! |