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Wow wat a nyc chappie bettr finish dt n i mzt cy i h8 da part whr kakarot iz being beaten down lyk a weakling b real man

i really love this story and can't wait for you to update it.

hreat story and i love where it is going. Please add more.

please please pleasepleasepleaseplease! UPDATE SOON!

this story rules! update update update soon soon soon soon ! :) :) :) :) :) :)

ok i just read this story and it is GREAT! I know it's been like two years since you updated but do you think you could finish this story? thank you!

this is such a good story! you should have another vegeta x gohan fluff moment. it's just too cute! he he he. update soon

wow,this is a great story,I like the fact that Vegeta is the dad and not Goku(I don't like goku) I can't wait to see what happens next.

Isn't "You're trying to take the best of me go away!" part of a Linkin Park song?

Amazing fic! :D

And honestly, all of what you have wrote should be the original story! It's much more awesome and interestening than the original!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Update soon and keep it up! :p

PunkOnna

it will be intresting to see whats defrent in this virsion of what happned i call them alternnate realitys. waht about goku he orignaly went ssj. altho i much perfer vegeta to reach that goal firs cence he is a true saiyan and he has bean under frezas rule for years. vegeta has a sunon in this fanfict how intresting

wheene are you going to write more abofut gohan and how does this timline diverge frome the orignal timline as it pertains to gohan i mean

i wonder what happen to gohan, why do they belive he is dead.

Hey if your going to do a highschool chapter, please PLEASE!, don't make Gohan act like in DBZ. Make him act like right now.(He's a warrior for goodness sake!)