Reviews for Over the Line
ElenaSliverstone chapter 12 . 1/20/2019
My heart is broken for him. Poor Draco.
ElenaSliverstone chapter 10 . 1/20/2019
I hope Severus doesn’t die. I’m hoping he actually get a girlfriend instead of mope for Lily
ElenaSliverstone chapter 8 . 1/20/2019
I’m guessing Voldemort sprung them out. This getting better and better
ElenaSliverstone chapter 4 . 1/20/2019
I love this story already; So precious how they’ve become friends.
ElenaSliverstone chapter 2 . 1/20/2019
Amazing chapter!
ElenaSliverstone chapter 2 . 1/20/2019
I love this AU. I’m glad Severus is the hero and killed Voldemort before he had the chance to make more horcruxs
ElenaSliverstone chapter 1 . 1/20/2019
So much positive reviewsSo excited to read
ElenaSliverstone chapter 1 . 1/20/2019
I’m so eager to start this
DJArla chapter 31 . 8/18/2018
I’m not sure if you’re still updating, but I thought I’d leave a comment anyway...
I really enjoyed the plot and the character development. However, I think you could benefit from a beta or at least a second out of eyes to help you fix spelling mistakes and continuity errors. (If you want, I’d be happy to help).
I hope you do continue to update because I’ve really enjoyed reading this so far!
JangMiSong chapter 30 . 5/24/2018
Wait what was the phrase to trigger rainbows? Love the story!
BadassBulbasaur chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
I was kinda surprised at how mean Harry was, but it also makes sense. He was raised by James and although James is a good wizard, he can be very prejudiced and mean toward slytherins and "dark" families.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/22/2017
I'm liking this so far but I noticed a small error. When Draco says 'I'm worried about my mom', it should be 'I'm worried about my mum'. I don't think it was very noticable, the only reason I noticed it was because my country uses british spelling. Anyway, good chapter!
Guest chapter 31 . 3/13/2017
I'm confused. A couple of chapters ago Neville's gran died iirc and now all of a sudden he is visiting her over the summer? Also your spelling is atrocious. Perhaps you should find a beta reader.
But otherwise the plot is nice.. an interesting AU.. keep it up..
It would be nice if you could update more frequently.

Regards
an avid reader
Wynterlace chapter 31 . 2/8/2017
Cute story, continue writing
Guest chapter 32 . 1/5/2017
Why did you repost chapter 31?
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