| Reviews for Over the Line |
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ElenaSliverstone chapter 12 . 1/20/2019 My heart is broken for him. Poor Draco. |
ElenaSliverstone chapter 10 . 1/20/2019 I hope Severus doesn’t die. I’m hoping he actually get a girlfriend instead of mope for Lily |
ElenaSliverstone chapter 8 . 1/20/2019 I’m guessing Voldemort sprung them out. This getting better and better |
ElenaSliverstone chapter 4 . 1/20/2019 I love this story already; So precious how they’ve become friends. |
ElenaSliverstone chapter 2 . 1/20/2019 Amazing chapter! |
ElenaSliverstone chapter 2 . 1/20/2019 I love this AU. I’m glad Severus is the hero and killed Voldemort before he had the chance to make more horcruxs |
ElenaSliverstone chapter 1 . 1/20/2019 So much positive reviewsSo excited to read |
ElenaSliverstone chapter 1 . 1/20/2019 I’m so eager to start this |
DJArla chapter 31 . 8/18/2018 I’m not sure if you’re still updating, but I thought I’d leave a comment anyway... I really enjoyed the plot and the character development. However, I think you could benefit from a beta or at least a second out of eyes to help you fix spelling mistakes and continuity errors. (If you want, I’d be happy to help). I hope you do continue to update because I’ve really enjoyed reading this so far! |
JangMiSong chapter 30 . 5/24/2018 Wait what was the phrase to trigger rainbows? Love the story! |
BadassBulbasaur chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 I was kinda surprised at how mean Harry was, but it also makes sense. He was raised by James and although James is a good wizard, he can be very prejudiced and mean toward slytherins and "dark" families. |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/22/2017 I'm liking this so far but I noticed a small error. When Draco says 'I'm worried about my mom', it should be 'I'm worried about my mum'. I don't think it was very noticable, the only reason I noticed it was because my country uses british spelling. Anyway, good chapter! |
Guest chapter 31 . 3/13/2017 I'm confused. A couple of chapters ago Neville's gran died iirc and now all of a sudden he is visiting her over the summer? Also your spelling is atrocious. Perhaps you should find a beta reader. But otherwise the plot is nice.. an interesting AU.. keep it up.. It would be nice if you could update more frequently. Regards an avid reader |
Wynterlace chapter 31 . 2/8/2017 Cute story, continue writing |
Guest chapter 32 . 1/5/2017 Why did you repost chapter 31? |