Two of my Oc groups are ancient criminal syndicate that connect nearly every organized crime and worshiped by criminals as gods .The other are ancient demons that predate Kayuga arrival during time when Gods walk among mortal world .Some bloodlines descendants of human breed with them and legends creature like Succubus ,Yuki-ona and other inspired and carried on through time .Few remain agenda of these demons and lesser demons seek to release their brethren and master from imprisonment ..
Demons March
Patrions Sin .

Wow! I just read through all the chapters and in a nut shell it's great. There is a lot of depth in this story that is glossed over by other writers. You have a unique writing style that weaves a story without spoon feeding the reader, I like that. I do wish that there was more NaruHina interaction, but I understand that with the flow of the story, it would seem forced, especially with how busy both characters are. Regardless, I am really looking forward to your next update!

I've enjoyed reading your story so far and look forward to finishing what you have written. However, I feel that your style of writing is too superfluous for a fan fiction. I'm not saying it's bad but there are too many abstract words and details used to describe too narrow of a sequence of events. I rarely ever comment on a fic and am only doing so because I've had a few drinks, but I believe that describing so little in such a descriptive way detracts the average reader from seamlessly following the series of events. It may just be me because I have read far too many fanfics that I know the cannon story in written form by heart that it just seems like it's just extra wasted effort slowing down the progression of the story. Fanfictions are all about changing some details of the original to fit the "what if" and going from the authors imagination from there or just the creation of an entirely new AU, and I definitely see your differences from cannon but it also seems like its following too close to cannon to justify such descriptive events for every action especially for something as short as the wave arch. I don't want this review to be harsh criticism and a "you should write how hundreds of other writers write" kind of review, but I want to say that I feel that it is describing too much and not even as much of what the character feels or thinks but of the simple things that can be wrapped up easily in a few words. I haven't written a story myself so I cannot judge too harshly and I applaud your skill for having written so much already but I felt I needed to make my feelings known

Love this story, so many plots and subplots. It will be interesting to see were the anti-ninja, Sabaru and the God Tree plots will go. Besides, there is still no clue why Minato was not human. Thanks for sharing your story!

Reading the discription of this story I have few character fit if interested send me a massage if not send me massage .
Hyuuga archer/medic
Ex-ambu kenjituist
Scientist/inventor assassin
Yanamaka detective/medical/psychologist
Nara Uchiha with grudge

I am only in the second chapter of this story and I already see this as a Naruto/Hinata pairing(Really hope that is not the case as I read further).

I read the first chapter, and it seems really interesting! I will read the rest when I will have some free time. See you \_(_)_/!

If need Oc's let me not got lot both villains and good guys.
Rogue ninja ,criminal syndicate,cult ,true demons ,mass murders,Pirates ,crazed expirement subjects and other such individuals .
Good guys got ,clone Madara ,lab made Senju,Yanamaka genius docter Detective ,Hyuuga archer ,Kurama genjitsu specialist ,former retired student of Kushina ,and many more that might find use or interesting .

Kurotsuchi be influenced to help clan return to fame she like future Kage considering her lava you need Oc's let me now have lots of them both villains and allies .

Punishing him for obeying his superior officer... How professional.

Ahh Kakashi wishes to abuse Naruto as the "Glue" to hold a team that hates him together... I think that is Cliche #2?

im liking the story so far but when is naruto going to become even somewhat strong? i mean this story is about sovereignty. that means a ruler with no contest and he seems pretty average so far. i like your writing and i dont know how long you plan this story to be but it just seems hes progressing slowly and in stupid ways he knows of shadow clones and there effects yet cant use them in training?

You used perimeter in place of parameter.
And will we see naruto anytime soon in this mission?

Author it is a travesty that you have so few reviews and favorites, I was mortified to see that when I looked properly. I had actually thought I had lost this masterpiece and was so sad, then I re-found it, that had made my day. The scroll of seals stuff is amazing. The characterizations are amazing. I can't wait to see what sword Haku becomes, I love the sacrifice necessary for the creation of the swords. Iruka and Yuugao's interactions are also amazing. It has been a long time since I read this story so I can't remember any flaws, but the fact that I remember the awesomeness of this story should say more to you of how much I love it. Honestly every bit that I remember is pure gold. Keep up the amazing work and I hope you update soon.

Again nice chap Lady

Nice starting