Reviews for Orochimaru's Mistake: Naruto the strong
Starlord Master chapter 7 . 4/6
Sweet times.
Starlord Master chapter 6 . 4/6
Good opening.
Starlord Master chapter 5 . 4/6
Well done.
Starlord Master chapter 4 . 4/6
Yikes!
Starlord Master chapter 3 . 4/6
Anbu are overrated.
Starlord Master chapter 2 . 4/6
Good times.
Starlord Master chapter 1 . 4/6
Dang.
Some one chapter 6 . 10/15/2019
Don't do POV you haven't done it in any other chapter it is illogical to start now. if this was an actual book to be published without certain circumstances that require POV to be introduced this would be scrapped and need to be rewritten. Adding POV and removing it in sporadic ways basically makes you story read like this line
-_-_-_-_-_-_ it's not enjoyable please refrain from using POV in future.
Monster King chapter 7 . 3/9/2019
Great job please continue the story
Guest chapter 7 . 11/6/2018
Nope sorry not from Margaret Thatcher its a quote from a Chinese proverb with an unknown author
Guest chapter 7 . 11/6/2018
The quote is from Margaret Thatcher
davidchurchill262 chapter 6 . 8/21/2018
with the uzumaki clan sword the abilities for it could be limitless since the uzumaki have a unnatural affinity for sealing and with sealing someone can do almost anything
shunshu chapter 7 . 5/11/2018
hola! me encanto muy buena la historia espero que lo actualicen pronto besos
HadrianPotterGryffindor chapter 2 . 11/22/2017
dude listen i hate rape as well because it sickens me to no end and yes your reason as well
KingSparda7 chapter 1 . 5/25/2017
bueno bella mamat
e un guevo
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