Reviews for The New Girlfriend
Tonsoffandoms chapter 1 . 2/5/2019
I didn’t know I needed this until now
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 5/16/2017
this is very different to your others. We get a very good showcase of Mary Jane (a character I've never liked much) and an excellent spotlight on Wade. I really don't like her line about competing with someone who was no competition at all but then that is something I can see her saying.
Kyuubi-dono chapter 1 . 12/16/2016
This was so great! I hope you continue it! Peter should come home, and Wade should tell him that MJ stopped by. Update this when you can, I really enjoyed this.
Thais ML chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
I started do reading and laugh, but at the middle and the end is becoming more serious and sad. That was unexpected and really enjoyed it. I loved this conversation of MJ with Deadpool.
yfcychvjhvrydtrdyviubirxwardcv chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
Awesome! I follow you on Ao3 but I never knew you had a fanfiction account ;D !
This one is one of my favorites on Ao3. I enjoy this story :)
WhoAteMyEnchilada chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
That was cool. Unusual too!
SoulMore chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
FAN!
Marley Smith chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Loved this! I really felt bad for Deadpool.
viridianaln9 chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
I love this, it was wow.
Joschy-no-Eien chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Okay... a fic with MJ! Let's see how that goes! (ー)

Oh... Peter was the sweetest and most caring person... yeah.. we know.. and we all know 'bout the booty.. (౪’)

*takes a step back* Sometimes even I get scared on Wade's sudden temper changes. Woosh boy. If I were MJ I would probably have lost all the beer I just chucked down on his couch.

Oh wow... this is getting seriously... wow ..serious...!?

Oh my sweet honey momma... this was so sad and beautiful.. and I am sure there could actually grow something unbelievably beautiful from this seed those two had placed that day between each other.
MJ grew up because of Wade, just a bit, tiny but still. And Wade got something like approval by someone he would have never expected it to get. And without realizing I suspect MJ got to see everything Peter loved and hated about Wade. His humor, his temper, his lacking self-respect and -love, his idiocy, his friendliness, his care, his pity, his politeness, his rudeness, bluntness and his careful touch.

And how MJ described how Peter's love goes deeper than skin, but to the core of a human being. That was definitely the most romantic and beautiful thing I've read for months now.
*sniff sniff*

Thanks Merry.