Amazing! Loved it! I always wondered what happened in between scenes and you described it perfectly! Thank you so much!

And then I come out of now where and take a pic for blackmailing

I love moments like these, they're rare enough in the show!

Aww, this was cute!

You have a knack for comparisons - specifically in this story with Timothy and Spike. I really felt like this could have been part of the episode or the beginning of the next one, how Raphael goes to make amends and check on each of his brothers. Well written & cute story.

I loved this! I like how you filled in gaps of the ep and a reason as to why Slash attacked each turtle in the way that he did. Even when watching the episode, I felt the most sorry for Mikey. He got it the worst compared to the other two.

I forgot to mention how I love how you paralleled Donnie/Timothy to Raph/Spike. Very nice!

I like his moment with Donnie and how Raph threatened him. lol

Anyway, I really like this. Very heartfelt and shows how caring Raph is in a general sense and how much his family means to him and how he truly is the protector.

LOVE IT

This was great I'd love to read more :3

oh god...this was so sad and sweet at the same time...hope you make more..

Aww this was sweet. I like the back stories of what happened after Slash got to them. Nice story!

This was so sweet! I recently watched the episode and loved it! You have a great way of entering a characters head and putting their thoughts in words or in this case into a wonderful fanfic!

I love it. From the filling in of unseen scenes, to the theories behind why Slash attacked each of them. All the way to everyone's emotions and relationships with each other. I love it! Bravo!

A really lovely story :) This episode is one of my favourites and I love reading great stories like this on it

Aw love the brotherly bonds and how Raph relates to past episodes to help. XD Mikey and Donnie are going to wake up wondering if they should wake up there older brothers or not.

Adorable, sad, and hey, I'm glad you mentioned the Donnie talking to the mutated Pulverizer thing, and comparing it to Raph and Spike, because I've been thinking the same thing…
I love this fic. It has brother fluff and angst and everything… I always really, really felt sorry for Raph, and the fact that he practically lost his pet, the one thing he was especially gentle with (actually, Raph seems to have a fondness for - non mutated - animals in general), in this cruel and unusual way. And to have him almost kill his brothers…