boo ash greninga

i feel the story is a little rushed

AMAZING STORY
Man you are even better than the writters you made Serena an interesting character and did amazing things with all the characters you are just amazing you should continue the story dude its just amazing

I really enjoyed this story it's great and all but there should be more ash and dawn moments in this story even have ash ask dawn on another date like they did in your last story when they were in unova so far there has been very little romantic moments between ash and dawn I know u can do just as good in this story as u did in your first story before u made a sequel which is this one no offense to u

Nice. Snivy is back.

I'd love to see Liam reappear, with Espurr evolving during a battle against Team Rocket, can that be possible for the next chapter?

Like you're story I'm a pearlshipping fan too just working on new fanfiction pokemon yugioh destines

can you make Liam's Espurr evolve as well in the next chapter please?

Minun's Metronome will get these following moves in battle: Flying Press, Hyper Voice, Moonblast, Sing, Luster Purge
also Ash has a Hawlucha, Liam is good at translating what the pokemon are saying,
plus Espurr evolves which he uses as his third pokemon

The order goes like this:
Whismur (Bonnie states it cute)
Vullaby
Espurr (evolves)
Meowstic (Female) (Newly-evolved)
Minun
Foongus
Shiny Braixen

There they meet a boy with an Espurr, the boy is named Liam, later they meet Valerie, but before Clemont can use his Aipom-Arm, Liam's Espurr stops Bonnie by using Psychic and brings her back to Clemont as he scolds Bonnie. In the middle of the battle Serena's Fennekin evolves into Braixen.

i thought ash and dawn were going to kiss

does fennekin evolve in those episodes

can you add some more pearlshipping moments?

when will we see contest

Good chapter! I really enjoyed it! Looks like Serena has come far eh?