This is good please update soon

Ha ha ha! This was really quite interesting to read, especially how you write these characters!

Oh man... When was my last review on this story? January 20th? It's been such a long time! All I can say is great chapter, and I'm glad you're resuming! I'm still here to support you!

Amazing chapter! I was surprised that this chapter was over 8000 words! That's a lot of work for these simple scenes being extended. 10/10

I really like the similarities between our stories. It gives me a sense of familiarity when I think about my story. About the characters' stats... I just want to say that you're going to have a very long list in the future. XD

I am so looking forward for your future chapters! There may be potential ideas that are like mine, which I am very intrigued. There might be the same badges, partners, attacks, scenes, and more! The partners and the interactions are the ones I am excited the most!

Great chapter and great story.

Nice chapter! I like some of the interesting and small parts like the explanation of Goombario's training and your version of badges!

A great solid chapter! I really liked how you mentioned the Goomba's arms because it makes sense. I actually put my hands up in the air with excitement! I really liked a lot of things, especially the characters being in-character. Between you and me, if I were to rewrite my prologue of Paper Mario Eds, I still would not match to this high quality chapter.

The only thing that bugs me was Mario's accent. Are you sure the accent is correct? Even if Mario had that accent, I would not risk it and use the accent in my story. Just a thought...

I hope you have a Happy New Year, NinSegado!

Great start. Can't wait to see what happen's next.

Eh, it was a pretty good chapter overall. No complains, with the exception of Kevin. Why is he evil? I know he detested the Eds in the show, but he never acted so cruel to them.

9.5/10

awesome

Wow! What a great introduction! I enjoyed reading this chapter a lot more than I thought! I really like your choice of vocabularies, especially for the characters. The characters were spot-on! When characters are in-character, I can really visualize the story.

The main problem, right before I read your story, is that this story is not in the crossover section. I know someone who made that mistake around a year ago. You are "risking" your story in the incorrect section, so fix this problem to accumulate crossover viewers.

This story does have great potential, but I know it must have been tough writing just the first chapter. I know that from experience such as writing 6,000-9,000 words per chapter. Other than that, I'm looking forward for the next chapter!