You made me cry

In reality as soon as her feet thaw from Smaug's body heat she will be SO miserable from all the bleeding and cracked skin without proper medical treatment she will most likely die a painful death.

And being that long in the cold she is most likely going to go into hypothermia due to the extreme differences in temperatures will only make things worse in the long run.

Oh my gosh! This is so horrible and beautiful at the same time. After reading the first paragraph you had me hooked, and the ending wow! Very different than what I expected. When I mentioned horrible, I mean that in killing the girl, although I understand why. Definitely was shocked. A nice interpretation! I loved it.

It was so beautiful and sad

Wow! I am truly amazed by this incredible story. I loved every bit of it's sad tail.

Nooo! So sad! Poor Xanthe. What a compelling story.

Awww. So sad but beautifully written. ;;

I just have one comment, you have it written in both past and present tense. Generally you just pick one. Other than that it's pretty good
JFDragonFire :)

AW! :(

I really enjoyed reading this, but it was so sad at the same time! You did a wonderful job with the writing! :) I found the part where it says 'He recalled the day Xanthe asked him where babies came from. What an ordeal.' hilarious! LOL! Poor Smaug! XD I really enjoyed your character Xanthe! She's so sweet! :)

Anyway, great job on writing this! I'm adding this to my favorites! :)

Oh god so many feels! :,(

this was sooooo good
I wish could have been more

I just... I can't... GOSH I can't explain why I like this so much! You know what you should TOTALLY do? MAKE A SERIES OF DRABBLES TALKKING ABOUT THEM! I'd freakin' love that! I think it would be amusing to watch Smaug try and explain 'where babies come from.' That little part made me laugh. Love this!

A very interesting twist on Smaug; very creative and very well written! :)

I love it! I only wish there was more :(

Beautiful... and sad. :-) Well done...