I love the story. Hope you return to it someday.

Hmmm. Interesting premis for a story. I gotta admit though, I kinda wish you did more story/plot following the original timelline (the timeline for the first few chapters) It's not bad, I've just read a loit of AU's that just follow a lot of the original timeline rather than making it their own. Keep it up man (or woman, or both, or neither, or something else entirely)

continue my dude it was good better than any story I've read

I totally didn't realize until just now that Talitha is an anagram for Thalia.

Is it just me or could that also be taken as an insult. Saying that she didn't look as beautiful before.

I really love this story!
It would be nice if you update again.
You promised to make the next chapter pretty long so...
With best regards Yesse

It’s funny that talitha said that thalia can call Ace, ass because I’m German Ass means Ace.
Im From germany by the way

3 chapters just to get through the gift giving ceremony, which is total bullshit. The gods wouldn't offer immortality to 7 demigods like that. And Percy couldn't be the god of water, he's the son of the sea god. He could only ever be a minor god of the sea.

Why do all the good fics die?

Please please please update! I know you might be busy but please don't leave us here! This is amazing!

What was the point of walking into the camp if he didn’t want to start there. Maybe he should have flashed them somewhere else instead. That comment just made him seem very stupid.

Please Please PLEASE COME BACK AND KEEP WRITING THIS STORY!

Why did you have to stop such a magically awesome same station it was one of my favorites. Now I'm mostly on Royal Roads Legends.

update please, i love this

I absolutely love this story and hope to see more soon as you can update. This is very well written so keep up the great work my dear author