please please please update soon :D ive been rereading everything and this episode (after 103) is my fave

I was wondering when Alice and Cilan did break? because in your sequel when Alice goes to her new journey, Alice was heartbroken that she and Cilan broke up. I'm just curious when Alice goes to the Kalos region, will she found love again in your sequel, if you are planning to pair her someone in that story, I'm just throwing it out, but what about Alain (the cute guy with black & blue mega evolution Charizard)

Please update soon.

Whoa. Apparently this quarantine has everybody reading fan fiction, because I decided to read the comments on a whim, and wowed there are so many reviews!

My opinion of scraggy is exceptionally low. Which kid doesn't want a Pokemon that hikes up his britches all the time like trash? That was just ranting, and nothing was aimed at you.

Update please?

Is Ashley Eckstein the voice of Alice

I have just discovered this story, and I binged reading it in a week... I hope that's normal especially with an author and story you absolutely love! I have been looking for a good Cilan story and I have finally found it! I love all of the twists that you put into this story so far to make Alice still connect to Ash, yet Alice is still defined as her own character (which is a feat in and of itself). I can rant some more about how I love this story, but that would be an essay... So I'm just gonna go on and say... YES I am happy that Alice and Cilan are together. I love the slow burn romances, especially when it was so obvious from like the 5th chapter. I love the conflict between the two's minds when it comes to the future and all that. You have no idea... I honestly think their friends would be like, "Finally. We saw this coming from a mile away. Why didn't it happen sooner." This will probably be everyone's reaction, except for Cameron's since he doesn't seem to know what is going on half the time. As for Iris, I think she is happy for her best friends, but she may also be a little sad or jealous. This could be due to the fact that she had a celebrity crush on Cilan cause conically Iris is like 11 I think. I will be honest with you, as a child I had crushes on people would were 6 or 7 years older than me, so I can see where Iris could possibly be coming from.

There we go one of the first reviews I think I have ever written since I've come to the site, and definitely the longest. Keep being awesome SKS and keep on writing!

3 ya! Marie

I literally squealed. I loved it, and love this! Cannot wait for the next chapter!

So how old is Alice? Just curious as it isn't mentioned(if it is, I've managed to completely soon over it so I'm sorry.)

To be fair Trip was never as big a dick as Paul was, I'm always surprised that they went that far with Paul abusing Chimchar so bluntly like that. At least Trip cared about his pokemon to a degree and was only wanting to make them stronger, sure he's oh so privileged and sees others from other regions as below him, at least he changes and has character development. Amazing chapter, I loved how Alice and Cilan finally got together and in such a cute way :D

This is amazing! I’m kinda expecting that Trip just kissed Ash in front of Cilan.

I totally agree about Virgil winning the League, it was quite weird to have him someone we don't spend much time getting to know at all win, especially since it's rather easy to take on most Eeveelutions with a well timed strategy that he would be able to get to the top would of been highly unlikely. Great chapter can't wait for the next one!

Please update soon.

I can’t wait for the unova league

thumbs up to this chapter, really had me wrapped into the story