The ending was adorable and loved that you saved things getting meta for later in the story.

Neat story. Good work!

Cute story with a cute ending. I was expecting more (intrigue, fights, who knows what else?) but for its purpose (that I can guess) it's good. Average girl and average boy meet, live happily ever after... until the next cataclysm shakes Azeroth and maybe kills one of them, at least.
I can't really blame the gamer, for starters it's a miracle he even noticed them, let alone the other details he was "supposed" to see. For another, I don't think there was anything he could have done about it even if he saw it. At worst I'd suspect he'd have been thrown there without the chance to return to his Earth.
Anyway, it was nice, thanks for the story.

this is to good

this is good

I do like the story, but the ending is kind of an I don't know, kind of weird, but I don't think anyone else would end it like this. I give you full points for originality.

I really enjoyed the whole story, thank you.

I'm late on reviewing as usual, but better late than never! ; )

Anyway, I'm surprised on how this story ended, I love how you crafted the ending with someone completely unknown, who is unknowingly on to something. But, I feel this story could have gone a bit further, I was sure when Chromie mentioned Garrosh that there would've been an arc revolved around Adam and Mary pursuing time travel. In the process of it, finding a way for Mary to get back to Earth, somehow? Mary probably adapting into a certain class along the way? Maybe some 'parent' bonding with Luis, since he's pretty much alone now?

Just some ideas, but I 100% understand if their won't be a sequel or anything to this, writing can get very boring and frustrating, especially when you're having writers block.
But I'll still be checking now and again, and maybe some of your future stories? : )

I... Just... Loved it! Loved how unusual it was, loved the plot twist and dammit LOVED THE ENDING!

why did you end the story?! You could have added some more action :/

Awww it's over?
That was a sweet ending though. I liked it. :)

Well, another wonderful story has come to an end. Can't say i'm 100% happy with how it ended, but i'm not the author XD We can't have everything we want now can we? haha. Where will you go from here? Planning on making another story? Working on one that's already started? Taking a break? Either way, this story was a pleasure to read late at night when updates were noticed. Overall a cute story. I hope to see more from you in the future! Until then, take care :D

I really liked this chapter. :)
Hope to see an update soon! This story is so fun.

EHHHH I can't believe I completely missed this chapter! So sorry for not reviewing earlier! D: Looks like things are starting to wind down huh? Glad to see that Adam and Mary are so close. I must say I enjoyed this story, and I hope to see some more of your works as they progress! Until next time!

Wow, so many feels in one chapter, she had to think about a lot. It sucks that she can't go home, even for a moment