Why doesnt this story have more reviews? It is adorable I absolutely love it. Wonderful job and great idea, I just couldnt stop smiling as I read it. And for the record I like the brothers death more in your version than the movie haha

Great story.

Um... why in the world would Gimli ask his dad, "why would kili love a pathetic Elven princess", when Gloin already said loud and clear that she was a captain of the guard! She was never a princess. She was a badass fighter and warrior which he already made clear before Gimli made that comment. Not that there is anything wrong with being a maiden/princess anyway. There is still unfortunately hatred for people who are feminine in this world.

Weren't there also women in Tauriel's army group? It looked like there were some.

I love the concept of your story line but I think it may have been rushed a little.
I think something along the lines of them both dying together while protecting each other or fighting along each other is going to happen in the next film. As depressing as it sound :(

just watched the movie. and I must say... this is great!

Aww, that was so cute and sad at the same time! Wonderful fic, I love it 3

Dear Batgirl,

That was fantastic! I loved it, especially the ending. Using Gimli and Gloin to tell the story was such a great idea!
-Samuel

That was awesome! Truly amazing! Loved it, and the fact that you did kill Kili the way he's supposed to die in the books, which I support. And the little scene with Gloin and Elrond at the end was nice. Although, the elves of that area rarely drink ale. But other than that, this was awesome!

Oh Gimli... You have no idea... That was great!

I like this. *points at your story*

It makes me happy.

Good luck with your writer's muse!

Noooooo! I don't want Kili to die! I know he does but if that detail is changed in the movies I will be very happy. Cute story by the way.