Reviews for Commencing Overwrite
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 37 . 8/8
I think a guide would help a lot
reminiscent-afterthought chapter 36 . 8/1
Whoops, I thought I'd reviewed this but apparently not.

And looks like you've neatly wrapped our two halves of the story together as far as the Ichijouji brothers and Davis are concerned. And Ryo, handing out miracles like currency... Does not help I'm rewatching SAO at the same time lol. And putting soul into it... I wonder what that's going to mean for Davis.

And Ryo's fallen into the god fallacy again. He really needs to stop doing that, though to be fair he is trying to twist that wrench. Maybe some oil or grease will help? XD
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 36 . 7/3
There’s something ominous about the miracle
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 35 . 6/28
Well that’s a cliffhanger

Also it’s interesting that Ryo chooses to be a little kid
reminiscent-afterthought chapter 35 . 6/28
Haven't seen Rika and Ryo for a while, and Izzy is poking his nose and about to get it cut off, huh. I wonder if you're hinting at the big climax here... We should aim to get there sooner rather than later, huh. And Rika is still as snarky as she always was, though she hadn't changed a whole lot unlike most of our other characters. I wonder if she's going to have a break the cutie moment soon, or that's one of the perks of having been handpicked by Ryou. Fruit for thought anyway. But this story is moving full steam ahead now!
reminiscent-afterthought chapter 34 . 6/26
Interesting you picked TK's perspective for this, but it's certainly an interesting one, especially since Davis has grown up and TK, being a Saint, kind of hasn't. And Yolei and Cody too, long time no see. :) And we've unveiled Ken's destination haven't we. Time to get that part of the plot wrapped up then. But a really nice summary of information, with some extra tidbits that we'll be expanding on down the line. Looks like we inadvertently threw in some Dawn/Dusk lore as well... but considering the ensemble of characters, probs a good thing we didn't throw those characters into the mix as well. We are going to have lots of fun with this in the future, aren't we?
reminiscent-afterthought chapter 33 . 4/16
Ooh, plot thickens and we get to see a few twists to Willis I'm not sure we've shown much of so far. I better wrap up my plot ends so we can dive into finale proper, shouldn't I. But here we have Cherubimon again, and Terriermon's gone down a slightly different evolution path since the anime, and Henry is being adorably clueless amongst it all (which is actually quite depressing, in context). Nice use of the prompt. :D
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 33 . 3/30
Huh, I’m still confused, I should probably reread and read your friend’s fic too
reminiscent-afterthought chapter 32 . 3/14
Ooh, we've jumped into the future. And I can't remember if this is the first explanation we get of Jeri's circumstances or not... but either way, the emotional trauma is potent here! And this brings together a few of the other perspectives as well - the monster tamers, namely, and seems like there's still a fatal lack of communication going on. They didn't learn after last time did they? Or maybe it's the circumstances themselves leading to the loss of trust again. And that teaser at the end... It could be a while before we flesh that out.
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 32 . 3/12
TBH I completely forgot what was happening here but I like how you portrayed his anxiety
Jay Hayden chapter 32 . 3/11
Ah... Jurato the only Digimon ship I've ever really cared about one way or another, it gets so little recognition so I'm glad to see it referenced here, even if tragically. Welcome back!
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 31 . 5/13/2019
This story is a little hard for me to follow (I’m sure I need to read your friends fic as well) but some of the drabbles gave me feels nonetheless. The video games one stands out.
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 17 . 4/29/2019
[There was something wrong with Henry, even before he got sick, she realized. But it didn't matter now. It was too late to ask.]

This line made me sad
reminiscent-afterthought chapter 31 . 11/6/2018
Ooh, Shibumi gets to channel Gennai. :D I thought for a moment it was Homeostasis but apparently not (unless you're not treating Gennai as a separate entity - and Tri has coloured that confusion as well...). A really informative drabble! So now we know what's going on with Ryo, why he hates ENIAC and why the other Chosen are also slowly getting affected by this virus. Lucky there are a few special cases and non-DDs running around trying to save the world. But with no ENIAC, I wonder what they plan to do. And squeezing that into under 800 words... great work!

(Also, will we get a drabble with ENIACs destruction, I wonder? It'd certainly be fun but idk if it'll add anything plot wise at this point...)
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 31 . 10/16/2018
Seeing this still going makes me so happy.
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