| Reviews for The March of Time |
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   PrincessMagic chapter 14 . 7/25 ha! yes wow love this! Allison is such a great character! |
| deborah-sucks chapter 14 . 7/14 yes! i’m loving the way you’re writing this this time around! i’m so excited to see where you take this. can’t wait for the next chapter! hoping you’re well and safe xx |
| AdarlansEowyn chapter 14 . 7/10 Rereading for the first time in so many years and I forgot just how much I adored this story! I got all the feelings again, I've been on the edge of my seat every chapter, I actually had to walk away at one point for a moment because I was freaking out too much-this is just the best. The. Best. I'm so glad you're posting it again! I can't wait for the next update! |
| ro781727 chapter 14 . 7/10 Nice keeping some elements of the book in by having the wall crack open instead of the floor. Poor Alison, she has to learn not to worry about everything but easier said than done. |
| monkeybaby chapter 14 . 7/7 Awesome update! |
| Jemstone6259 chapter 14 . 7/6 At first I was like shit she’s going all dark hero on us. Then I was like na she just scared shitless, should have saw that coming. Then I was like so cute they be cuddling and shit! Then finally I was like why don’t there a chapter 15? Have I already run out of chapter. Shitty twinkies I have... damn... well now I’ll just have to favorite and follow and wait for an update! Love the remake here and can’t wait for the next chapter! Will she be stuck with the orcs or slink away with Bilbo? Both ways sound interesting. Honestly she stood up to Thorin I cheered and hoped she’d say more instead of holding her speech . Personally I would have snapped and started spouting off about how important Bilbo is and how shitty their missions ends and how if he and his needed live effect if I can go home or not. But hey everyone handles stress differently. She had grown so much since the first chapter and I can’t wait to see how she changes and grows next. |
| Pint-sized She-Bear chapter 14 . 7/6 I forget how good this is until I read an update |
| Jemstone6259 chapter 11 . 7/6 The ship has long since sailed! |
| Jemstone6259 chapter 9 . 7/6 I find her reaction to Fili being in danger the most interesting. Is this the strength and trait spoken of? |
| Jemstone6259 chapter 8 . 7/6 I love that you gave a scene from Bilbo. It’s so nice and refreshing |
| Jemstone6259 chapter 6 . 7/6 Film is soooo sweet and Kiki just needs the sense knocked back into him. |
| Jemstone6259 chapter 1 . 7/6 There is nothing compared to falling into middle earth while holding onto a pair of your own god damn jeans! I died of laughter there! |
| UnlimitedShadow chapter 14 . 7/3 YES! Finally an update and a great one at that! This made my weekend :) |
| DawnScarlet19610 chapter 2 . 5/9 I find it really annoying that she keeps fainting like some pathetic damsel. That's twice now. A panic attack I can see, but a dead faint? I don't like Alison at all from what I've read so far. |
| I-Can-Spell-Confusion-With-A-K chapter 13 . 4/26 I just reread everything you have up so far and I'm so in lol. I love it. I hope to read more soon. :) |
