This seem like a rewrite of all the bad pj fanfics ive read only with this, very, very, unlikley ship. This is both dreadfully cliche and painful to read. im suprised i brought myself to read it all.

And also, a potion that makes him treat percy badly, how original, not cliché at all -note sarcasm- sorry for hating so bad but its somewhat necessary,

and this is a conversation, go out guy i dont know. p.s. watch movie. p.s im percy... im sadie -kisses- lets get married- and your grammar is really bad as well, these are the words of emotionless people.

This story needs change, a lot of it, no emotion, freakin' birds everywhere, more percy x hestia than percy x sadie, and you stop updating for 6 years, i mean add some fluff or somthing

Just read chapter 3 and I'm done reading, I'm done hunting myself to read this story. This, author, is a flame. Maybe take your damn time and actually be original when you Wright your next story, yeah?

This needs serious editing. It's basically all the badly written cliches used in betrayed Percy Jackson fanfictions. The only thing unique is that it's a crossover and the pairing is Percy X Sadie. The grammar, spelling, as well as several words not being where they should be, it's atrocious. I hope you find the time to not only edit and make it so that it's not so painful to read, but I hope you completely revise it and turn it into a story that no one else has thought of. Another thing, Percy meets Sadie on a boat, someone from Europe going to the US for an American holiday that she shouldn't really care for, and then Percy asking if she wants to see a movie even though they spoke less then ten words to each other., no thoughts about Sadie of course after the movie yet thoughts about whether the Norse are around, the way you are setting up the pairing is trash. And that's the truth, this ain't a flame, but fact is this story needs to change. You might as well have gone and copy pasted someone else's story while inserting Sadie a e because THAT would be better than this.

What about anubis

PERCABETH FTW

errrrrrrrrrr coool ok...

i neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed more percy x sadie!pls!

emotional status:7?

bird?wtf?

liked it!

that was way better! loved the percy x sadie aura1! lol!

i was hoping for some more sadie x percy, not percy x hestia...better next time!