So, like, I know its been, what- 4? 5? Years or so... will you update soon? Please update this is really good!

Wow. Only one word can describe Hazel's attitude at the moment- or at least on this and the other chapters- puberty. LMFAO

I just found this fic~ and I loove it!
Generally I find as much as I love “OC joins OP crew” fics I start feeling less excited because the copy the story point for point with just minute changes.
BUT YOU DONT!
:DD
ITS GREAT!
It actually inspired me to read (I watched the anime to the time skip last time) the manga~ I’m on Thriller Bark (and daang the manga goes so much faster then the anime).

I love how Hazel has her own dreams, fights, arcs, and she’s always learning~
Plus how she’s pretty much everyone’s little sister too, not just Sanji’s. How close she is with Nami and (now) Robin is great, and this arc in particular is heart wrenching because she /just/ forgave Robin~
And I don’t think I mentioned how in-character everyone is? And how smoothly your writing lets Hazel to fit with the crew.

I can’t wait for The Scene with the crew! Is that going to be in the next update?

Guh! And when they get to Thriller Bark! Will she join with the castle crew or be with the heavy hitters~

YOU MADE ME CRY YOU SON OF A BITCH!

I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH! (T-T)

IF I EVER MEET YOU IN REAL LIFE I WILL BEAT THE CRAP OUT OF YOU!

THEN HUG YOU AS I CRY FOR MAKING SUCH A BEUITIFUL STORY! (T-T)

More writers block again?

I'll admit: I was kind of disappointed in this chapter.
The coddling and treating Hazel like a kid is double-edged. Its okay when Sanji does it and when she needs comforting, but when it gets to a point when others treat her as being unable to look after herself it gets insulting to her as a person and to how you depict her as a character.
During her fights she seems capable but you don't really show her as contributing anything of value such as actually defeating one of Wapol's bodyguards.
Hazel's an interesting character but I feel as if you could've treated her with a bit more respect in this chapter instead and toned down on the 'cute kid' treatment.

Also the Monkey-chan nickname of Vivi's is rather grating and I wanted to slap her.

The interaction in canon between Vivi and Luffy when they first arrived on Drum Island (when they had the confrontation with Dalton and the villagers) always irritated me and was one of the few moments that made me dislike Vivi's character. For all that she's a caring monarch she always struck me as very naive and sheltered.
But the way you handled the moment in this chapter read more smoothly and made her less obnoxious to me. Well done.

Denial about her singing as Zoro is about getting lost.

Personally I think that death was a rare plot device. I remember that someone said that one good way to add a little flavor to a story was to add or kill off a character

The part about babies and prostitutes KILLED me! XD

I'm so upset that this story hasn't been updated in SUCH a long time! That makes me so sad! I'm in love with this story and I'm in love with your character and her relationship to the straw hats! You haven't worked on this story in a while so I won't waste time BEGGING you to write again...so thank you for writing what you did!

Oh Hazel looks like a guy now but after time skip she will look hot ans like a young woman, is what l predict

I have found a One Piece fic that I have fallen in love with! I love your character and you fit her so well in with the Strawhats. I truly look forward to future chapters.
Can I request an omake of when Hazel started referring to Sanji as her brother, that be so cute?

Oh god... female crew member at the rescew... And of course since she was at the Baratie I don't think any of them explained to her what happen when a woman hit puberty...

The omake... I'm dying