i am so scared... what is this chapter. PROTECT RIN

Please update this story.
I'm dying here to know what happens to haruuuuuu
Makato...
Plzzzzzzz
Update it...
It's the most breathtaking story I've ever read

Where is the rest of the story? Please finish it off so that I will know what happens to them.

I could've done with out reading about the biting part. But other then that the sex part was really steamy. Good job!

I just love this part of the story, but wished that there was more sex details to it.

Hey, so, uh...I just wondering why aren't you updating this again? I've followed this story with my previous acc and now its error, so I made new. But apparently the chapters hasn't move on from 19 so mind if you give me a proper explanation?
Because, hell yeah, your story is interesting as a shiet..whoops what a bad mouth I have. But really, I looking forward to see the rest! Please it has to be a proper end, right? Don't leave me alone with my own wild imagination. So, pretty please?

P.S: oh, and sorry for my bad English teehee

I just keep reading this story. Though I have to say its complicated and I wish they would just become happy together because I love Haru x Mako! I realy want to know what your idea is with this story and what the outcome is. I hope I will be able to read it

Nothing hurts my heart more than stumbling across a very well-written fanfic that captures my attention completely, only to find out it was abandoned. I hope for an update but considering the last one was almost a year ago I doubt that you will continue :(

Such a well written story with an interesting plot. I want to know more! Please continue

WHERES THE REST?!

Hi, I reaaly love you stor so I really wish that you can continue and update soon

Haroharo! :3

Whoa this is really good! coughalthoughMugiskippedalltheMratedscenescough

Through reading all of this, Mugi's guesses (wild or not) has been true so far but one thing's still bugging Mugi: where the heck does Nagisa collect all those information about Ácweorran from? Mugi smells something very very fishy about this...

And will this story be continued?

Jaa ne! :D

Hello, first of all i really love this story, it's very clever! I've just gotten into the Free fandom (after all the hype went down) so i've been searching for some decent fics, and this one was a treasure to find I pray you update soon, the mystery's have been bugging me, i've been wracking my brain to figure it out. I'm glad you're using a lot of characters, i myself try to use as many characters as I can when doing a fanfic. That being said, i've been trying really hard to figure out who the hell King is, i'm guessing he's an OC, other wise I do have one other character in mind I can think of that could play him, although i'm not entirely sure the character i'm thinking of is appropriate.

Yeah Makoto kind of surprised me in this story, I don't mind that he's dark and secretive, and damn, he's kind of a whore in this fic! xD With the women, and some other male characters i was like damn Makoto you can't keep it to yourself for five min! Who haven't you slept with! xD that's just my opinion but its awseome whatever life he's had made him that way.

And i'm trying to figure out what the hell organization is this, is Makoto an assassin or something? Is it some of kind of Occult, and he's trying to convert Haru to be just like him? Dang so many questions. Please update this soon, i really want to see this glorious story to an end! :)

Ok. I read all 19 chapter today... Makochan scares me a lot! What's he gonna do to Haruchan!

I sure hope you still update this pls. This story is so intriguing! And I dont know who the heck King is! Plus the complete back story behind MakoHaru!

Hope you update soon! :-)

Wow. For one of my first Free! fanfictions that actually captured my attention, I definitely didn't know what I was getting myself into...but it's been addicting. I'm still a little confused about what exactly is this organization but whatever. D: Makotooooo. Why you gotta be so two-faced?!